Profile for Mrcoffeebean - Why it looks plain?

Mrcoffeebean aka Tham Wai Hon is a boy, has been a member since March 30, 2009, has scored 2,310 submissions, giving an average score of 2.68, helping 103 designs get printed.

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Jul 05 '10 by Mrcoffeebean
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Why it looks plain?

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reags on Jul 05 '10 at 6:55am

thats very cute Tham! I love how the moon trickles down onto the giraffe as spots. Nice work!

Mrcoffeebean on Jul 05 '10 at 7:55am

Thanks reags! Do you guys think i should add some more background like trees, cloud, owl or something in the dark?

Mrcoffeebean on Jul 05 '10 at 9:51am

waiting the comments.

Mrcoffeebean on Jul 06 '10 at 5:07am

Bump for help.

Dexter Spandex on Jul 06 '10 at 5:33am

it's a nice style, i like the giraffe. don't like the weird bits of moon falling down, it's a bit confusing with his spots. maybe just have a few bits near his mouth and perhaps on the ground rather than running down his whole body like that.

agrimony on Jul 06 '10 at 5:54am

if you put in background details, dont make them too big or it may distract from the main picture

Mrcoffeebean on Jul 06 '10 at 6:15am

Dexter, i should take your advice! Thanks a lot!!

Mrcoffeebean on Jul 06 '10 at 9:57am

agrimony,
what an advance idea!

Tikimasters on Jul 06 '10 at 2:32pm

Cute. You should probably draw a minimal background to this and also, the crumbs from the moon offset the giraffe's spots in a weird way. Great stuff so far though!