Profile for PencilPlusPaper - New design up ( Crying Lightning!!)

PencilPlusPaper aka Nas is a 19.78 year old boy, has been a member since March 4, 2009, has scored 72 submissions, giving an average score of 3.28.

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Aug 11 '09 by PencilPlusPaper

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New design up ( Crying Lightning!!)

heres the final design,...yay or nay?
im going to sub it real soon,just want to hear what your thoughts are. =)

Ivantobealone on Aug 11 '09 at 7:59pm

I like it a lot, would love to see on a tee though

TheInfamousBaka on Aug 11 '09 at 8:01pm

Ditto.

PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:23pm

added placement =)..watcha you all think?

kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:24pm

nie

kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:24pm

shit

I meant nice

PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:25pm

thank you =D

Ivantobealone on Aug 11 '09 at 9:37pm

Love it, not entirely sure about the text to be honest

kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:38pm

yeah I think it could stand alone fine without the text. Prolly better.

quister on Aug 11 '09 at 9:43pm

Yeah! Awesome but lose the text, it's a show and tell, or see and say as is. Better to let the viewer get it, more provocative IMO. Anyway, great illo, very unique, crying lightning bolts instead of tears. Maybe the nose and chin could be blue sky as well, I don't know, your call!

kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:46pm

would it be mean if I pointed out the nose looks a little phallic?

I just think I have a dirty mind. I'm sorry for saying anything. I guess I could erase it...but constructive criticism isn't bad, right?

PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:47pm

oh...it could be an alternative

PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:51pm

@ kashlen:ahah...i kinda already notice that...but i didint think it would look bad lol...anyway no harm done on the crit

@quister:that makes sense on the viewers getting it...i remove the text since it will get a beeter impact...and ill try those ideas out thanks

PencilPlusPaper on Aug 12 '09 at 12:06am

bump for text removed

PencilPlusPaper on Aug 12 '09 at 4:31am

any comment before i sub it?