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PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper aka Nas is a 19.78 year old boy, has been a member since March 4, 2009, has scored 72 submissions, giving an average score of 3.28.
  Aug 11 '09 by PencilPlusPaper        41 Comments        Watch this      Share:  Share on facebook    Share on delicious    Share on digg    Share on MySpace    Tweet this    Stumble this    Share this on Kaboodle   
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heres the final design,...yay or nay?
im going to sub it real soon,just want to hear what your thoughts are. =)

Ivantobealone
   Ivantobealone on Aug 11 '09 at 7:59pm
I like it a lot, would love to see on a tee though
TheInfamousBaka
TheInfamousBaka on Aug 11 '09 at 8:01pm
Ditto.
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:23pm
added placement =)..watcha you all think?
kashlen
kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:24pm
nie
kashlen
kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:24pm
shit

I meant nice
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:25pm
thank you =D
Ivantobealone
   Ivantobealone on Aug 11 '09 at 9:37pm
Love it, not entirely sure about the text to be honest
kashlen
kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:38pm
yeah I think it could stand alone fine without the text. Prolly better.
quister
   quister on Aug 11 '09 at 9:43pm
Yeah! Awesome but lose the text, it's a show and tell, or see and say as is. Better to let the viewer get it, more provocative IMO. Anyway, great illo, very unique, crying lightning bolts instead of tears. Maybe the nose and chin could be blue sky as well, I don't know, your call!
kashlen
kashlen on Aug 11 '09 at 9:46pm
would it be mean if I pointed out the nose looks a little phallic?

I just think I have a dirty mind. I'm sorry for saying anything. I guess I could erase it...but constructive criticism isn't bad, right?
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:47pm
oh...it could be an alternative
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 11 '09 at 9:51pm
@ kashlen:ahah...i kinda already notice that...but i didint think it would look bad lol...anyway no harm done on the crit

@quister:that makes sense on the viewers getting it...i remove the text since it will get a beeter impact...and ill try those ideas out thanks
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 12 '09 at 12:06am
bump for text removed
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 12 '09 at 4:31am
any comment before i sub it?
agrimony
agrimony on Aug 12 '09 at 4:37am
text removed
jamesf
jamesf on Aug 12 '09 at 4:38am
no text. looks ace
applesforjonah
applesforjonah on Aug 12 '09 at 4:42am
No text, I'd rather see the nose less "woody".
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 12 '09 at 3:36pm
i reduced th nose lines on the nose...looks better imo. Ready to sub?
3 days later
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 15 '09 at 8:38pm
bump for update
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 15 '09 at 9:07pm
rainbow or no rainbow...anyone?
Ivantobealone
   Ivantobealone on Aug 15 '09 at 9:09pm
The rainbow is a nice touch it adds some punch to it
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 15 '09 at 10:39pm
thanks ivan!!
agrimony
agrimony on Aug 15 '09 at 10:41pm
rainbow! maybe a tad thinner. but rainbow nonetheless!
urbffjill
urbffjill on Aug 15 '09 at 10:42pm
i like the rainbow, it brings it together for me
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 16 '09 at 12:31am
glad you like it...i was thinking of thining it actually
6 days later
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 22 '09 at 3:17am
bump for thoughts
Talking To The Ground
Talking To The Ground on Aug 22 '09 at 3:41am
Totally awesome... sub as is.
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 22 '09 at 5:10am
apprecate it =)
mr spiers
mr spiers on Aug 22 '09 at 5:55am
yeah, this looks awesome
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 22 '09 at 9:07am
thanks
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 22 '09 at 9:35am
design is sub...cant wait =)
5 days later
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 28 '09 at 4:29am
design is up for scoring...please vote vote vote and coment..thanks =)
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 28 '09 at 6:51am
night bump
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 28 '09 at 12:07pm
bumping
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 28 '09 at 2:06pm
bump vote
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 28 '09 at 5:47pm
bump for the day
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 29 '09 at 4:41am
bump for 5 days left
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 29 '09 at 8:15am
bump
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 30 '09 at 2:57am
4 days left..vote
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 30 '09 at 2:57am
4 days left..vote
PencilPlusPaper
PencilPlusPaper on Aug 30 '09 at 6:29am
bump
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