Hey all,
So..i've just posted a rough idea in the critique section. I know it needs a LOT of work and it is (literally) rough around the edges, but I was wanting some feedback before i continue (i.e-if you guys think it outright sucks then i wont be wasting anymore time on it!!!). So, if you have a spare moment please check it out. Please be honest-but not too hash (i'm a sensitive soul!).

Thanks