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achtung12
achtung12 aka Susan Peterson is 32.29 years old, has been a member since January 9, 2009, has scored 3,182 submissions, giving an average score of 0.62, helping 12 designs get printed.
AIM: achtung12
Newbie who would like some real feedback. Please! :)
Hi! I would like to get some more feedback if possible about my design. It is my first and I would just really like to know what people like or dislike about it. Especially dislike actually so I can see what I can do to improve.

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achtung12
achtung12 on Mar 18 '11 at 4:31pm
I do know I can't resubmit designs. It's more to find out what you like or don't like about it for future designs not a remake of this one. :)
Manupix
Manupix on Mar 18 '11 at 5:27pm
You can resubmit as long as you make substantial changes.

I'm not sure I get the concept, maybe that's me.
The opening of the mouth looks too straight.
And it would probably have more impact if it was pure pixel art.
Also I think that's one of those cases that TL warns about, of unnecessary use of 8 colors (or is that 7?). Could be done with 4 I think.
achtung12
achtung12 on Mar 18 '11 at 6:09pm
it's 7 colors. i intended it to be colorful, but i was worried it may be too many. the concept really is lisa frank meets betsey johnson. the lips were supposed to have a "disco ball" effect. i originally submitted it for the 80s sharpie contest but it wasn't executed well enough and so it was rejected. so i fixed it and changed the colors. anyway, i appreciate the feedback. i know this design isn't really like the designs that normally get printed on threadless.
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