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indieflea
indieflea aka Aar!! is a 23.74 year old boy, has been a member since January 24, 2005, has scored 1,665 submissions, giving an average score of 1.09, helping 13 designs get printed.
URL: http://www.tigerbreath.com/sketchblog/
AIM: Lets Get Smacked
Which one looks better?
Which one would look best on a t-shirt, if any? Criticism is welcomed but keep in mind these are rough drafts.







Edit: Apparently, my design reminds people of Weebl and Bob? I hope this was a good show because I have never heard of it in my life. :(


Vaporiss
Vaporiss on Aug 09 '05 at 11:17am
second one
travis76
   travis76 on Aug 09 '05 at 11:23am
second one, but the beam and pie don't match the style of the dude and ship.

and ditch the pieplate shadow or just go solid.

pie!
indieflea
indieflea on Aug 09 '05 at 11:37am
travis, when you're talking about different styles, do you mean the pie doesn't have a thicker line on the bottom like the ship does?



also, i'm not sure about what you mean by the beam being in the wrong style. clue me in if you can.
abeadles
abeadles on Aug 09 '05 at 11:40am
The middle one is cool. Maybe make the word "PIE" look like alien language?
Xrissy
Xrissy on Aug 09 '05 at 12:31pm
i like the alien pie thief... :)
themidtownkoala
themidtownkoala on Aug 09 '05 at 12:34pm
Yeah, I like the alien as well. I don't think I would consider buying either of the others.
Pifman
Pifman on Aug 09 '05 at 12:35pm
That center one is awesome! I'd also consider making the hover up doo-hicky centered though. But yeah, it's by far the best.
indieflea
indieflea on Aug 09 '05 at 1:09pm
thank you all for the feedback!



abeadles, the font idea is one i am taking into consideration, thanks!



pifman, haha yeah i know what you mean. it looked odd and i was gonna center it but i didn't have white out and i didn't feel like re-drawing it for that.. :(
techwarman
techwarman on Aug 09 '05 at 1:14pm
2nd one looks cool
morbidboy
   morbidboy on Aug 09 '05 at 4:09pm
pie/take one!
PATRICKwMORGAN
PATRICKwMORGAN on Aug 09 '05 at 4:13pm
Instead of the word "PIE", have "3.14!!!".
indieflea
indieflea on Aug 09 '05 at 7:29pm
Patrick, that's a great idea. Thanks!
bramble
bramble on Aug 10 '05 at 2:23am
This reminds me so much of Weebl and Bob.
Zachsta
Zachsta on Aug 10 '05 at 2:26am
3
swingliner
swingliner on Aug 10 '05 at 2:33am
weebl? bob? pie!
dolly
dolly on Aug 10 '05 at 3:18am
the second one defo, but dont do 3.14! its nice as just a plain old fashioned pie thief :)
Ady bear
Ady bear on Aug 10 '05 at 4:05am
the last one
KatieTheMofo
KatieTheMofo on Aug 10 '05 at 4:19am
Yeah, I'm glad somebody mentioned Weebl and Bob before me.



That was the first thing I thought of.



ps.-the second one is bestest.
AnnieKay
AnnieKay on Aug 10 '05 at 6:31am
Definitely the second one! I agree with no shadow on the plate though - it kinda distracts you from the main drawing.
wzrdofozfan
wzrdofozfan on Aug 11 '05 at 7:27pm
I like the first and second one.
with_the_worst_intentions
with_the_worst_intentions on Aug 11 '05 at 7:31pm
Lo Weebl!
MorganF195
MorganF195 on Aug 11 '05 at 7:55pm
yeah i love the second one but i agree with dolly about the 3.14/pie thing
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indieflea
indieflea on Dec 10 '05 at 9:53pm
If anyone else has any input on these, it'd be much appreciated. I have a big feeling I'm gonna try to design one of them tomorrow in Illustrator.
Robsoul
   Robsoul on Dec 10 '05 at 9:56pm
alien one, but his tracter beam thingie looks like a foot, clean that up and I'll be happy. but whatever, maybe that's what you want.
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Dec 10 '05 at 10:01pm
yeah alien one gets my vote as well

and yeah like rob said fix teh tractor .. just center it on teh descending post and itll be fine
abeadles
abeadles on Dec 10 '05 at 10:27pm
alien pie!!
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Aar likes drawing, vanilla milkshakes, bbq bacon cheeseburgers, kettle corn, apple toffe muffins, french fries with grilled peppers and onions, falafel sandwiches, and having a high metabolism.