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WAK O aka Jeremy is a 21.75 year old boy, has been a member since November 2, 2008, has scored 1437 submissions, giving an average score of 2.34.
  Jul 28 '09 by WAK O        5 Comments        Watch this      Share:  Share on facebook    Share on delicious    Share on digg    Share on MySpace    Tweet this    Stumble this    Share this on Kaboodle   
PLEASE ! please please!


HELP CRITIQUE MY DESIGN!

quister
   quister on Jul 28 '09 at 8:09pm
Been there, like what you got going on. Lots of good suggestions by some very constructive peeps. I threw in my 2¢ and I'll check back for your next V. Cheers!
WAK O
WAK O on Jul 29 '09 at 9:35am
thanks q
Spieliewielie
Spieliewielie on Jul 29 '09 at 9:52am
Why did you loose the 2012? I thought that was clever. Of course not everybody knows what it means, but still.

And indeed keep the stone look. Make it more grey again, less blue. keep the bodyparts in tones of grey and make the clothes coloured. If you'd like them to have an old look too you could make cracks in it like in old paint.

So try to make a vectorised stone structure. Make sure you have the natural lines and little stones, almost as tiny as sand, in the structure. Right now the structure is too big, like it's stretched out and that's why the stone look isn't coming off the way you probably want it. So the scale and depth created with at least 2 colours of grey of it is really important.

These are good examples of structures.

this one is made by me


from the internet




Good luck!
Spieliewielie
Spieliewielie on Jul 29 '09 at 9:52am
Sorry it's kinda big...
Efunk2332
Efunk2332 on Jul 29 '09 at 10:00am
i think u should keep the 2012 in the title as well
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