hahahaha, FRIGGIN. There are soooooooooooo many others on this site that can give you better advice on your crits, but I will try my best. I'm not really sure what went wrong for your first piece, other than the concept might not have been as appealing to most as you would want it to be. The pieces in the sub are very big and bright and might not have the detailed nuance some find appealing on this site. Maybe have a bit more going on in the scene, some bushes and shrubs with an interesting concept behind them just like the trees with eyes would help the sub along. Also, the tree limbs kind of just end at the top of the shirt, maybe fading them out or having the faintest hint of leaves would be better.



Overall, it's your first piece here so don't lose heart as many MANY people who have been printed here have had their first design or many after that finish early. Of the numerous collabs I've done with the amazing artwork of so many on this site, one of my collabs as well finished early a while back. I like your style, so keep thinking up cool ideas and sending them in, and try to take the thought-provoking critiques to heart and the blatant insults and nonsense some people throw around here with a grain of salt. Best of luck!