hey folks!

i'm looking for advice on my most recent critique. i think it's looking good, but it's really nice to get feedback on how to improve.

don't you hate "the monster mash"?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30650/monster_math

thanks!


eta: the t-shirt isn't based off of the "monster mash" song! it was merely stuck in my head at the time of conception!