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domedagen aka Joyce Li is 22.5 years old, has been a member since July 6, 2008, has scored 437 submissions, giving an average score of 1.67, helping 4 designs get printed.
Hi, first post here. :) Threadless is a great excuse to exercise my design/creative muscles.
So I had an idea that Jesus is very disappointed with the product Miracle-gro. Since it's still in the composition stage, I didn't think it was appropriate to submit this as a critique.
I have basically 2 designs:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v132/jac-k/sketch2.jpg
Jesus standing with a quizzical look. Either he stands shrugging his shoulders or scratches his head.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v132/jac-k/sketch.jpg
Here Jesus is kicking a pottery out of anger. I didn't think the original expression worked so i outlined in red another expression that I think is much more convincing of the idea.

Sorry if it's too sketchy or too big! Btw, the bag says Miracle-gro, which will be much more noticeable when I start fleshing this out. Thanks!

DaniellesGarden
   DaniellesGarden on Jul 12 '08 at 9:54pm
here this will work better.







domedagen
domedagen on Jul 12 '08 at 9:55pm
Yea, I'm a retard.

Sketch 2

Sketch 1
DaniellesGarden
   DaniellesGarden on Jul 12 '08 at 9:57pm
aww.. here ya go again

domedagen
domedagen on Jul 12 '08 at 9:59pm
lol, thanks. I didn't start off very well. oops :/
DaniellesGarden
   DaniellesGarden on Jul 12 '08 at 10:05pm
well first you wont be able to use miracle gro because thats trademarked. so it will need to be called something else.



but looks like it could be an interesting idea, but hard to say at this point in the sketch
domedagen
domedagen on Jul 12 '08 at 10:15pm
I think it's okay though because it's supposed to be satire. Unless I'm wrong.



Sorry for the clutterness lol. I'm really just asking, which is better at conveying the idea/for aesthetics better?: him standing or kicking.
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