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Phinx
Phinx aka The Phinx aka PixelManiac aka Tee-Shirt Ninja is a 19.41 year old boy, has been a member since June 29, 2008, has scored 2988 submissions, giving an average score of 2.52.
  Aug 15 '09 by Phinx        15 Comments        Watch this      Share:  Share on facebook    Share on delicious    Share on digg    Share on MySpace    Tweet this    Stumble this    Share this on Kaboodle   
This is one of my recent designs, I like it, but the question is do you like it? Tell me what you think I could do to either improve this so I could FINALLY get my first print!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50886/Dark_and_Shy_at_Day_Bright_and_Wild_at_Night

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Phinx
Phinx on Aug 15 '09 at 4:25pm
Hello? Anyone there? Anyone care?
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 16 '09 at 12:41pm
BUMP!!
SuperRyan
SuperRyan on Aug 16 '09 at 12:43pm
No, I do not believe in ghosts
SuperRyan
SuperRyan on Aug 16 '09 at 12:47pm
I'd like to see more of a concept in this.

Glow ink ghosts aren't really new and I think a concept would be the leading factor in a glow ink ghost design.
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 16 '09 at 4:28pm
I sorta turned it into a Grave sight turns into PArty Night type of thing. What do you guys think now?
SuperRyan
SuperRyan on Aug 16 '09 at 4:32pm
I'm liking this direction a lot better!

:^)

maybe have like a normal looking graveyard for daytime, then at night it turns into a nightclub setting with partying ghosts?
iPear
iPear on Aug 16 '09 at 4:34pm
I do man, don't even joke.
PuterBoy
PuterBoy on Aug 16 '09 at 4:34pm
i believe that ghosts are aliens.
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 16 '09 at 5:09pm
I believe ghosts are reruns of the earths memories, but that's just me. Now back to the design.
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 16 '09 at 7:25pm
yea.....Ghosts...
PuterBoy
PuterBoy on Aug 16 '09 at 7:28pm
i believe ghosts are demon aliens sent to protect the earth from space gods.
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 17 '09 at 4:42am
Because honestly when you think about it , most ghosts spottings are of a regular old timer doing a daily task over and over, so maybe the earth is playing a vision from the 1950's over in that same spot again. Lol yea too much depth in that theory, but seriously, the shirt, anyone?
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 17 '09 at 11:38am
Bump....?
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 17 '09 at 7:39pm
Another day another comment. Bump!
4 days later
sidepull
sidepull on Aug 22 '09 at 1:50pm
Hey Pascal - I saw your critique Dark and Shy at Day, Bright and wild at Night and I thought you might be interested in a study I'm doing:

Posted a critique? Does feedback improve designs?

Just to provide a brief explanation. I'm trying to see how feedback influences the development of ideas (in this case design). So, when you sign up, I'll send you a brief personality survey and then I'll gather your critique data and see how it all works together via the magic of statistics. Everyone that signs up will get a free personality profile and be entered in a raffle to win an iPod.
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