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velvetsamurai
velvetsamurai aka Natalie is a 26.43 year old girl, has been a member since December 27, 2004, has scored 8,992 submissions, giving an average score of 1.08, helping 79 designs get printed.
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Just looking for some feedback on my score. wondering what i could have done or whatever to have improved on this. i didnt really recieve any constructive criticism in the comments for it and i would like to know
Threadless.com Submission - Childhood Memories

EntertheForce
EntertheForce on Jun 07 '06 at 10:17am
personally, it doesn't speak out to me. like stuff animal blends too much into the background. i like the concept but everything is unison. plus, i took me a while to recognize that it is a stuff animal.
velvetsamurai
velvetsamurai on Jun 07 '06 at 10:20am
i am not sure i understand whats bad about everything being unison? also, how is it not reconizable as a rabbit?
EntertheForce
EntertheForce on Jun 07 '06 at 10:26am
like the design is blending into one mesh, when (at least from my understanding), you want to show the love that was shown to the rabbit. as for the rabbit, if you can put one worn eye in, i think it would be better.
KatieTheMofo
KatieTheMofo on Jun 07 '06 at 10:28am
I like the scribbly scene around the stuffed animal, but I'm not diggin' the animal itself.
velvetsamurai
velvetsamurai on Jun 07 '06 at 10:30am
ya, i agree it could have used an eye, i dont know how i missed that.

the design isnt suppost to blend out, its surrounded by doodles and skribbles and stuff i remember drawing while bored as a kid.



Katie,

Thanks, do you just flat out not like the rabbit/old stuffed animal, or more my particular rendering. i dont plan on resubbing, but i do wonder if the subject matter had something to do with it
EntertheForce
EntertheForce on Jun 07 '06 at 10:32am
yeah, i agree that the background is nice and works well. but i feel that the back overshadows the bunny too much. the bunny needs to stand out more. maybe a different shade of brown for the bunny or something.
velvetsamurai
velvetsamurai on Jun 07 '06 at 10:48am
ok, thank you enterthefource!
velvetsamurai
velvetsamurai on Jun 07 '06 at 11:23am
does anyone else have some constructive cricism on the sub?
jackanapes
jackanapes on Jun 07 '06 at 11:24am
i like it, but the rabbit can use some beady glass eyes, y'know?
velvetsamurai
velvetsamurai on Jun 07 '06 at 11:28am
ya, i agree, i dont know how i overlooked giving it an eye!
Veverka
Veverka on Jun 07 '06 at 11:34am
I loved it. I thought it was perfect. Gave it a $5. Especially loved the border on it.
velvetsamurai
velvetsamurai on Jun 07 '06 at 11:37am
thank you veverka!
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