Please see Version 2 of my critique. Is this sketch worth persuing further ideas with? Anyone want to collab on it? I originally wanted to enter it for the Loves Drawing competition but I'm very much a beginner regarding the computer side of tee designing so I may not have time to enter it. I'm learning my way around GIMP first of all as I'm unsure of wether Photoshop, Illustrator or Flash is what I need. Which Flash application is it that I need and how much is it?

My designs are hand drawn and then scanned into the computer and then I tend to get stuck.