so I have been living in Japan for the last 5 months... and there are some AMAZING t-shirts here, I kid you not... one of the main places I shop for them is UNI QLO they are actually opening one in NY and one in LA sometime in the future...

that's all fine and dandy... but you also run into T-shirts that say (and this is a quote):

"fuck hard weekend not here"
- I'm not even sure what that means

I will keep my eyes pealed for more random shirts that make no sense... but wow...

I have made one or two major changes (mostly the font) and gone thorough 5 diffrent versions (you might have seen some of them).

I welcome thoughts, and comments that are constructive, I am still new to design.

Thanks!

I did a redesign of my submission... and I think I like this better, can I get some feedback, this is still a work in progress and I shouldn't have submitted the other one so soon, I got overly excited.



I think the 'I' might need to be a little bigger, and I didn't change the figure at all, I also like him not having a face.

So let me know, and thanks for all the help!

[EDIT'v.2&3]
I updated the image with some of suggestions...

I am reworking it again so we have


then there is also a slight redesign to the first one...


I like this the best but I might change the skin tone...

thanks for the looks and votes

I agree my font should change

I have posted a few too many in my profile... and most of them have burned out at around 40, which seems to happen. Would you take a look at mine? I will score anyones who posts in this :-D promise.

Thanks everyone!

I made this, what do ya think?

I call it "how to break dance" let me know what you think I want the figures to be brown... on blue or maybe blue on brown... I auctally think that might be better. Thanks for any thoughts!

-a4r0n

I would like thoughts on one of my designs... but please be constructive, just saying things like "it is a bad design" don't help me learn. I thought this was an okay design, but it was rejected... and that's fine, but I would like to re-submit and I was looking for help since it is my first attempt.



thank you for your time

-AK