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a4r0n
a4r0n aka Aaron is a 27.56 year old boy, has been a member since December 24, 2004, has scored 6,058 submissions, giving an average score of 2.24, helping 80 designs get printed.
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I have made one or two major changes (mostly the font) and gone thorough 5 diffrent versions (you might have seen some of them).

I welcome thoughts, and comments that are constructive, I am still new to design.

Thanks!

a4r0n
a4r0n on Nov 28 '06 at 6:38pm
*bump*
theurbanraptor
theurbanraptor on Nov 28 '06 at 6:39pm
that guy doesn't look like a heart.

i dont like the font, it hurts my brain.



it looks like J X or Y Break Dancjing.



sorry.
Frank Vice
Frank Vice on Nov 28 '06 at 6:42pm
i'd prefer the regular font from i
a4r0n
a4r0n on Nov 28 '06 at 6:42pm
right... well... lol I guess my vision is lost on the masses. Sometimes you get too close to a project and it makes sense in your head, but nobody else gets it.



This is probably the last redesign for this project.
theurbanraptor
theurbanraptor on Nov 28 '06 at 6:44pm
i get the concept. its not hard to get.



try this.



make it say I ♥ Breakdancing but instead using a font, design the letters to be people doing break dancing moves. cause otherwise you're not gonna have a chance with it.
a4r0n
a4r0n on Nov 28 '06 at 6:49pm
I get what you are saying, that just isn't the direction I wanted to take it. I agree that the design you suggest could be very interesting, but I don't have the skill to pull that off...
a4r0n
a4r0n on Nov 30 '06 at 3:10am
would if be better if it didn't say break?



if it just had 'I (figure) dance'?
delilahchan
delilahchan on Nov 30 '06 at 3:41am
i think i (figure) dance would work, but the font is still the problem! it'll end up looking like danje instead of dance. try it with a new font :)
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 30 '06 at 3:52am
I totally wanted you to use the graffiti font for the font in your last post, and i like where you went with this design as you have improved it more than demolished its meaning. I think the graffiti font does its neccessary work for the design, but the writing needs to be more spaced out or just easier to readi n that font. You have five colors to work with, so i think using the multi-colored graffiti style (maybe a different color or two and a slightly different graffiti text style for both words) would punch up the design and give it that extra look of perfection that you need. I would vote very highly for this shirt as is, but it could use a little more refining to be accepted by the masses. I love that the breakdancer is using the lower word to balance himself for his electric boogalo dance moves.
a4r0n
a4r0n on Nov 30 '06 at 12:56pm
FRICKINAWESOME thank you for the comment, I will space the font out, and try using a different font for the I and the whole Dancing... thank you very much for the feedback!
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