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that guy doesn't look like a heart.

i dont like the font, it hurts my brain.



it looks like J X or Y Break Dancjing.



sorry.

i'd prefer the regular font from i

right... well... lol I guess my vision is lost on the masses. Sometimes you get too close to a project and it makes sense in your head, but nobody else gets it.



This is probably the last redesign for this project.

i get the concept. its not hard to get.



try this.



make it say I ♥ Breakdancing but instead using a font, design the letters to be people doing break dancing moves. cause otherwise you're not gonna have a chance with it.

I get what you are saying, that just isn't the direction I wanted to take it. I agree that the design you suggest could be very interesting, but I don't have the skill to pull that off...

would if be better if it didn't say break?



if it just had 'I (figure) dance'?

i think i (figure) dance would work, but the font is still the problem! it'll end up looking like danje instead of dance. try it with a new font :)

I totally wanted you to use the graffiti font for the font in your last post, and i like where you went with this design as you have improved it more than demolished its meaning. I think the graffiti font does its neccessary work for the design, but the writing needs to be more spaced out or just easier to readi n that font. You have five colors to work with, so i think using the multi-colored graffiti style (maybe a different color or two and a slightly different graffiti text style for both words) would punch up the design and give it that extra look of perfection that you need. I would vote very highly for this shirt as is, but it could use a little more refining to be accepted by the masses. I love that the breakdancer is using the lower word to balance himself for his electric boogalo dance moves.

FRICKINAWESOME thank you for the comment, I will space the font out, and try using a different font for the I and the whole Dancing... thank you very much for the feedback!