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wowrainbows aka Brent is a 21.46 year old boy, has been a member since May 23, 2008, has scored 1,181 submissions, giving an average score of 2.86, helping 110 designs get printed.
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Decided to mix up what I'm doing a bit. I very much need help deciding on what 'articles' should be on the cover of this and how many of them as well. A critique is more than welcome, along with any ideas and suggestions.

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L-M-N-O-P
   L-M-N-O-P on Jul 07 '11 at 1:14am
I'd say only 3 or 4 other articles MAX: you don't want it getting TOO cluttered.
As to subject matter:
- Something about helmets
That's all I've got.
agrimony
   agrimony on Jul 07 '11 at 1:24am
yeah id say about 3 as well. Im thinking the date should be more of
Jan 1967 since the mags are usually monthly? but small issue anyway
Andreas Mohacsy
   Andreas Mohacsy on Jul 07 '11 at 2:01am
no advice, just love... great job
wowrainbows
   wowrainbows on Jul 07 '11 at 7:35am
Yeah I'm thinking three as well. Time to look at old vogue magazines or something for inspiration. weird.
flwrs
flwrs on Jul 07 '11 at 8:30am
something with 'GOLDEN BOOTS' in it. Something about Pluto. And looking at old vogue magazines, some of them only have one or two articles on the cover. I'd say keep it at that.
wowrainbows
   wowrainbows on Jul 07 '11 at 8:37am
i like GOLDEN BOOTS, but you already knew that. What do people think of 'The Intergalactic Collection'?
reags
   reags on Jul 07 '11 at 8:42am
^I dig it, plus cool typography too as you've captured the style/era real well imo
speakerine
   speakerine on Jul 07 '11 at 8:49am
i LOVE IT!
wowrainbows
   wowrainbows on Jul 07 '11 at 9:05am
thanksguys. part of me just wants to use one article. It's a little more clean. we'll see!
wheatthins
wheatthins on Jul 07 '11 at 9:27am
verycool
Steven Rice
   Steven Rice on Jul 07 '11 at 11:07am
I really enjoy this. good mash up!
xiv
   xiv on Jul 07 '11 at 11:10am
love this.
mike bautista
mike bautista on Jul 07 '11 at 11:13am
I want this.
xiv
   xiv on Jul 07 '11 at 11:15am
'Heading for Space:
Key color - Interstellar Green
Key Clothes - The Soft Suits'
Musarter
Musarter on Jul 07 '11 at 11:19am
I think is great. The color and fonts are really great.

My two-cents: If you want to line-up the text on the right side, I would ad two more articles and push the astronaut to the left so the helmet is more centered between the T and Y. If you are considering putting the article text on the left, to off-set the larger feature article, I would add three articles and keep the astronaut centered.

Either way it will look great.
wowrainbows
   wowrainbows on Jul 07 '11 at 12:52pm
^Yeah that's a good point. I hadn't played at all with having him anywhere but the center. and I'm liking what xiv suggested. Something along those lines might work perfect.
--_
--_ on Jul 07 '11 at 1:08pm
great.
complete
complete on Jul 08 '11 at 11:10pm
this will print when you submit it.
huskynet
huskynet on Jul 08 '11 at 11:13pm
Brent how come you never tell us about this stuff. I always have to find it on my own. I thought we were friends and stuff.
wowrainbows
   wowrainbows on Jul 08 '11 at 11:15pm
why is your name Jake? nobody calls you that.
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