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aka Jonathan Taylor
is a 42.79 year old
and has been a part of the Threadless community for 9 years!
has scored 431 submissions, giving an average score of 2.68, helping 13 designs get printed.
Tighten up the illustration a bit more. I can see some "chin" showing through. Since the piece is basically the same illustration repeated 6 times, it would be nice if the first bee was as tight as you could get it... Then I'd buy it...
posted 5 years, 2 months ago in Boo BEES!
Looks like something I could get at SeaWorld...
posted 7 years ago in Three friends
I like how your illustration has made the pug much cuter than it would appear in real life. Where's the poppin' eyes, the drool, the non-existant snout? They look a bit like puggle puppies....
posted 7 years ago in Smelly Shirt
Make it an X-acto knife and I'll buy it!!
posted 7 years ago in The First Cut
It seems busy with the reversed type. I understand you're going for a poster look but I think the t-shirt design would translate better if you assigned the colors behind the reversed type to the type and just pulled everything closer together.
As far as Aunt vs. Anne: Aunt would require slighty more thought from certain american accents in the north-east where they pronounce it with the long aaaah "a" sound. Brits too. (anybody know what cunucks use, the english speaking part?). Otherwise, I like the connotation of a "down home" feel that, combined with the 40-50 era soda ad offsets the cocktail and anarchy undertone nicely. Anne sounds like your begging people to "get it" rather than think about it...
Otherwise, excellent idea. Truthful sentiment. Can't get enough cocktails in my wearable graphic design (got 2 already from other sources), real or metaphor!!!
posted 7 years ago in Best Served Vigorously