Profile for biotwist - to sub or not to sub

biotwist aka Jonah is a 31.58 year old boy, has been a member since March 7, 2008, has scored 42,462 submissions, giving an average score of 2.34, helping 390 designs get printed.

URL: http://ameturishatbest.blogspot.com/
AIM: To KILL

Feb 15 '12 by biotwist
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to sub or not to sub

I like my improvement with shading and linework but something feels off about this composition and I know it I will get a low score if I submit it

toopersent on Feb 15 '12 at 11:52am

The hands, feet look funny.

deep space monkey on Feb 15 '12 at 11:59am

I hear what you're saying... right now it looks kind of unfinished, or at least the style doesn't match the concept—in my opinion anyways.

What if you took it into illustrator and made everything really sharp and angular?

Here's a pin-up I have up on my site that's in the style I'm talking about:

biotwist on Feb 15 '12 at 2:25pm

I'm just not going to sub this

L-M-N-O-P on Feb 15 '12 at 2:32pm

I think it's a unique entry. You SHOULD sub it. You could have one arm holding onto the bomb, and the other in the air behind her: the classic 'bomb pinup' pose.

toopersent on Feb 15 '12 at 3:00pm

Yeah, it is unique for sure. I think for it to be in a more pin-up style that I would agree with Deep Space Monkey: the lines should be thinner, cleaner, sharper.