Threadless T-Shirts - Profile for Wozzy

Wozzy aka Laura is a 23.22 year old girl, has been a member since March 3, 2008, has scored 3232 submissions, giving an average score of 3.01.

Apr 10 '08 by Wozzy

17 Comments

Watch this

Crit Me!!!!

i dont suppose you guys could crit me a little on my new designs..
they all need work but it would be great to get some feedback so i can rework..

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17863/Lola_the_Paranoid_Bunny

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18324/Run_for_your_life_Lola

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18330/Midge

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18329/Ark

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18328/Dirk

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18327/The_Goodies

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18326/WereWozzy

Thank you muchly

Wozzy XoXoX

Todow on Apr 10 '08 at 5:03am

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmno?

realslimnatey on Apr 10 '08 at 5:04am

looove the illustrations on all of them! personally, i dont think they work on tees though but still, they are totally fantastic and you should sub them anyways just to see what kind of feedback youd get from the other scumbags on here!

staffell on Apr 10 '08 at 5:24am

what nate said - you're a good illustrator, but none of these images work on tshirts. try and think about a clever concept to go with them

Wozzy on Apr 10 '08 at 5:34am

thanks...
thats kinda why i put them in for crit because i do character illustratiion and never can back them up with a concept

realslimnatey on Apr 10 '08 at 5:44am

i hear that! if i knew what to draw that would look good on a shirt, id sub like crazy!

try taking a look at andygs stuff on here, i mean, hes an excellent illustrator as well and he tells a story on his designs

staffell on Apr 10 '08 at 5:51am

The critiques are not here to help you come up with concepts. They're to critique the art and help build on concepts.

Mountain Gnome on Apr 10 '08 at 5:54am

Yeah Wozzy, Staffel is right, YOU have to at least come up with something. you cannot expect us to do all the work. You have a really cool illustrative style, but your designs seriously lack the humour or story needed to make a winning design.

nezbit on Apr 10 '08 at 6:09am

I have a concept — if you do it and you win --- you have to split the prize money with me.

d3d on Apr 10 '08 at 6:13am

yeah nice style but apart from The Goodies none of them is really a "design". put them all on one shirt together with a swordfish stuck through them all in a row and you'd have something.

Mountain Gnome on Apr 10 '08 at 6:17am

LOL at d3d'd idea!

nezbit on Apr 11 '08 at 11:14pm

brain storm words (like courage, crisis, nightmare etc....
and draw the characters to illustrate the words- do it fast in
a sketch book- I guarantee ideas will come to you.

35 days later

NJz Kollectionz on May 17 '08 at 3:02pm

I 2nd d3d's idea

olie! on May 17 '08 at 3:05pm

like the others have said the characters are good art but they need more of a concept to work as a shirt. Try thinking of ways of telling a story with them and then you'll be on a more successful path methinks.

ISABOA on May 17 '08 at 7:29pm

what everyone is saying is what we all grapple with

the unified magic that makes a shirt not only a nice drawing but something someone wants to identify themselves with

a peculiar and difficult challenge to say the least