So I've got this design in the critiques, and I keep reworking it and playing with it and redrawing it and such and I just can't seem to get it right. I like the idea, I think it could be cool, but I just can't seem to the get the execution right.

Check it out here.

But yeah, it's just not really working out, colors, composition, line quality etc. Some of the characters in the shirt are kind of obscure.... basically I'm just having a tough time with it. Maybe sticking it in a grid and labeling each person, make them all fighting? I don't know. Ideas are welcome.