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Rainbowhead
Rainbowhead aka Mary is a 25.84 year old girl, has been a member since September 13, 2007, has scored 305 submissions, giving an average score of 2.96, helping 5 designs get printed.
Looking for some extra feedback on a couple pairs of slogans specifically:
Set 1:
"I don't just have issues. I've got entire volumes!" (I prefer this one)
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"I don't have issues. I have VOLUMES!"
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"I don't just have issues, I've got VOLUMES!"

Set 2:
"Composer looking to Score"(I'm slightly more partial to this one) (and it seems you guys are too, thanks!)
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"Musician Looking to Score"


After voting on (please, all of) my slogans, could you please let me know which of the above mentioned ones you liked better and any other comments you could give me? I'd be much obliged to rate your slogans if you'd be so kind as to grant me a few morsels of your thoughts. Thank you kindly.

d3d
   d3d on Jan 31 '09 at 3:59am
i prefer the first one shorter, and the composer one
coffeecandle
coffeecandle on Jan 31 '09 at 4:30am
^ agreed
4 days later
juice13
juice13 on Feb 04 '09 at 7:57am
I like the shorter one too, and I may not be the brighest crayon, but I'm everyone's fave color.
Rainbowhead
Rainbowhead on Feb 04 '09 at 3:01pm
thanks. I preferred the first one of the first set because it had the word 'just' in it. I wasn't sure if it'd make more sense if it was more of a comparison rather than simply stating you have something not the other.



How would "I don't just have issues, I have volumes!" work? (combo of the two)
noodlezoop
noodlezoop on Feb 04 '09 at 3:09pm
nah, drop the "just." I use that word all the time and it annoys the crap outta me.



you'll get the people who don't get it right away on the re-read, which makes for an even sweeter play on words.
Dawsheen
Dawsheen on Feb 04 '09 at 5:46pm
Agreed, if you drop the "just" it's less like a sentence and more like a tee. Also, definitely composer :)
Rainbowhead
Rainbowhead on Feb 04 '09 at 9:38pm
Okay, so I deleted the Musician one and the long one about volumes. Thanks for the input, and please (if you haven't already) vote on the rest on my slogans so I can decide which others to delete or keep.
rbthatcher
rbthatcher on Feb 04 '09 at 9:40pm
VOTING...NOW!!! You've got some GREAT ones!
Rainbowhead
Rainbowhead on Feb 04 '09 at 10:17pm
I just went and voted on every one of all y'all's slogans. :)
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I am a college student and a Kroger employee. I am really crazy with energy sometimes and too many people take me too seriously so they think I am just really strange. I'm trying to write original stuff here. . .

I like writing slogans. . .a lot. I write them in the margins of my notebooks while sitting through boring classes. I text them to my Xanga pulse (it's sorta like twitter, dudes) so I won't forget them by the time I get home from work. I repeat a lot of the ones I like (even one's by other people) to people in real life, just to see if they get a good reaction.

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