Hi all!

I've had an idea and I realized this design. I'd like to know if it's clear and immediate for all. There is my design submitted in the critique section and if you have 2 minutes take a look at it and give me some feedback :)
thanx!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/95603/Angry_Chart

:))))

hi all,
it's been a couple of months that i'm trying to write a slogan in typetee section and it's always the same, i cant break the wall of 50% :( Is it just me and my slogans sux so much? lol

Due to my origins and different culture (italian) i surely think and i like different things, but this typetee is really frustrating LOL. So here I am to ask you forum-ppl, if you have time, to take a look at my latest slogans and tell me what's wrong and/or if you like them.

http://www.threadless.com/profile/578670/clearcut/slogans


thanx to all