I like it!

But definitely the vertical composition.

The only way I could see the horizontal composition working is if you had one of those made up encyclopedia entries beneath it briefly giving a quick reference to the pun.

Like dscwen's Canadian Goose

i works fine as it is. i like the vertical placement

What if you replace the dots with doodles or scribbled dots?
Cool idea, tho. I'd totally wear it.

sweet, and yes to vertical placement 8)

Thanks dudes, it's up!

Final day!