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jzef
jzef aka jean-francois is a 25.79 year old boy, has been a member since July 17, 2007, has scored 596 submissions, giving an average score of 2.97, helping 24 designs get printed.
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I am trying to translate a comic I've done some weeks ago.

Here is the first page of a comic of three:



and the original version:


EricDiaz
EricDiaz on Mar 26 '08 at 12:03pm
the last sentence should be: Snowball, your little kitten, didn't really run away... Oh and i would break Superhero like Super-

hero
againstbound
   againstbound on Mar 26 '08 at 12:04pm
mon francais n'est pas tres bon, mais je pense qu'il est correcte
againstbound
   againstbound on Mar 26 '08 at 12:05pm
my french seems to suck, eric is right, i didnt look at that
iPear
iPear on Mar 26 '08 at 12:06pm
On a side note, worst father ever.
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Mar 26 '08 at 12:08pm
"haha. where on earth did you hear that?"

seem more correct to me, only slightly.



and if you make that change then +

"from mom, she said you were a super-moron"



and then the last frame i would personally rephrase it so it goes: " your little kitten, Snowball, didn't really run away..."
againstbound
   againstbound on Mar 26 '08 at 12:10pm
i can help if you ever want to translate it to spanish ;)
Tonteau
   Tonteau on Mar 26 '08 at 12:11pm
The frech font is better.



Vraiment.
staffell
   staffell on Mar 26 '08 at 12:16pm
I think the English font is only a placeholder right?
jzef
   jzef on Mar 26 '08 at 12:20pm
yes the French font is how i write. I put the English font in Photoshop. Thanks for your corrections, I'll change this ;)
sonmi
   sonmi on Mar 26 '08 at 12:21pm
this is awesome!!
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