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Feb 06 '12 by vinnylo
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WIP :: Venn diagram solar system :: update

wut u guys think? im adding more text, but this is going to be subbed. any suggestions?

update: 2

xiv on Feb 06 '12 at 11:51am

class it up a bit.

loorrrd on Feb 06 '12 at 12:44pm

I think you should lose the text on the earth sun and moon.

If you want them there, then how about adding on the other parts as well. Something like:
earth and moon = night
earth and sun = day
moon and sun = eclipse

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 1:58pm

that was exactly wut i was going to add loorrrd. :)

does everyone else agree to lose text on earth, sun and moon?

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 2:02pm

im sorry i read that wrong, im going to keep the text...

xiv, any suggestions?

xiv on Feb 06 '12 at 2:45pm

Use a different typeface, and if you are to include more type, use both a serif and sans serif. Also use two different sizes (one for the serif and other for sans serif) Try out some of these:

perpetua
adobe song
hoefler text
gotham
eurostyle

Add some complexity to the earth, and sun... like there is on the moon. Maybe even utilize photos to gain texture and detail which adds richness and depth and the obvious(realism).

When you present it, dont have it on that grungy backdrop Its not being printed on a stone or piece of old paper. I think this confuses some people and could jeopardize a positive vote.

toopersent on Feb 06 '12 at 3:16pm

I agree, the grunge backdrop makes it look very dark, and it is kinda the opposite of what you are going for. Also, my lack of science knowledge is astounding, but I'm not sure how the three elements come together and make life.

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 3:18pm

without the sun and the moon life would not exist on earth.

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 5:22pm

how bout now? im having a hard time figuring out wut to do with the middle. any ideas? or leave it?

toopersent on Feb 06 '12 at 5:25pm

I like it better now. Perhaps a growing plant or something?

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 5:26pm

hmmmmm.....

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 5:26pm

baby in the womb?

toopersent on Feb 06 '12 at 5:28pm

I think it would make more sense if it was something organic. It is also a pretty small space you have to work with.

Manupix on Feb 06 '12 at 5:37pm

You might be trying to cram too many ideas here: Venn diagram + CYMK + an astronomy-related fact that's hard to explain graphically and not so many people are aware of.
I do hope you find a way though coz I like it ;)

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 6:50pm

Thx

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 9:48pm

bump

vinnylo on Feb 06 '12 at 11:41pm