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JiuNoon
JiuNoon aka J K is 32.69 years old, has been a member since August 10, 2004, has scored 4,077 submissions, giving an average score of 1.75, helping 26 designs get printed.
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Of all of my designs, the one that has received the highest praise is "It's as Easy as That" (found at http://www.threadless.com/submission/36379/It's_As_Easy_As_That). In the end, it got a 2.99 - a whole lot better than my first two submissions but still kinda stinging that it's .01 off from a 3. I don't know whether it'll make it as a shirt because several other recent designs got higher scores (most of which I actually gave really high scores to) but, in the interest of improving, I want your thoughts on how (if possible) I could bump this design over the 3 point level.

A few things I've learned already from posts:

One frequent comment is that the hands don't look realistic and lack fingernails. While I am proud of the hands, it is supposed to emulate the instructions on a package of chopsticks so they really should be more diagram-ish. I've also been told that the fingers are too long but, truth be told, they are the direct proportions of my own fingers so I don't really have any other model for the hands. Likewise, the fold of skin under the pinky in the 4th image looks like a sixth finger - I know - and the fork is a bit hidden by the thumb but it was basically a judgment call on my part whether to go for model accuracy or image cleanliness.

KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Apr 26 '05 at 7:11pm
my rule of thumb is to never sacrifice realism unless it's necessary for cleanness. That's really a judgment call, but I generally try to go for realism first, then subtract realism later.
tammyleino
tammyleino on Apr 27 '05 at 8:56am
I think this is really cool, and if it got a 2.99, you would probably be smart to re-work it a little and resubmit it. Here are my thoughts - take them how you will ... On the first picture, the horizontal lines running across the two hands look kind of like misplaced fingers to me. Maybe pull the lines together more, move them down on the hands and make them less thick. The second hand seems slightly misshaped. The base of the hand is too rounded and a bit too fat. Also, the fingers are a little too long and chubby - particularly the middle finger. I think the other two hands look great!
tammyleino
tammyleino on Apr 27 '05 at 8:57am
And BTW, I can't imagine your Zombie Teddy shirt won't get printed. It seemed a lot of people loved it.
JiuNoon
JiuNoon on Apr 27 '05 at 10:26am
Wow. Thanks to both of you! I hope you're right about the Zombie Teddy shirt, tammyleino, because it would be a great wedding present for my zombie-loving fiancee'. I just finished my Wired Loves Threadless entry (a week too early -whoops!) so I'll try to adjust It's As Easy As That.



Only thing is that I HAVE rounded, fat hands with long, chubby fingers, so I'm just going to have to guess on what normal fingers look like...
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