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tanairi
tanairi aka Tanairi is a 20.77 year old girl, has been a member since July 2, 2007, has scored 276 submissions, giving an average score of 2.20, helping 7 designs get printed.
My 7 year old sister's brilliant poetry.
Title: I Saw a Dog

I walked
under the bridge
I saw a dog
eating some chips
he was going
to my house
eating chips

He was a dog
He was a puppy
Everything happened
in the house
in the house

He jumped over the fence
Look at me
Look at me

PogoLightning
PogoLightning on Sep 12 '09 at 6:58pm
that's deep.
martiandrivein
   martiandrivein on Sep 12 '09 at 8:10pm
hahahahahaha yes!
goldensara
goldensara on Sep 12 '09 at 9:11pm
awesome kid
tanairi
tanairi on Sep 12 '09 at 11:15pm
I think that your sister is destined to become a famous rapper.
juliejeremiah
juliejeremiah on Sep 12 '09 at 11:42pm
love it!
PuterBoy
PuterBoy on Sep 13 '09 at 7:40pm
im pretty sure the dog is a metaphor for something.
mype4nut
mype4nut on Sep 13 '09 at 7:42pm
That sounds like a dream i had once.
tanairi
tanairi on Sep 13 '09 at 7:47pm
I've been trying to figure out a super cool abstract meaning for it, but with no success. Everyone is welcome to try.
tanairi
tanairi on Sep 13 '09 at 8:10pm
Aww. Were you an only child or just the youngest?
B 7
   B 7 on Sep 13 '09 at 8:11pm
that is a total rip of emily dickinson
B 7
   B 7 on Sep 13 '09 at 8:11pm
only joking it's very cute and lovely
tanairi
tanairi on Sep 13 '09 at 9:57pm
Aww. So you had older brothers? Sometimes I wish I had older siblings to guide me through life and whatnot. Maybe if I had an older brother I'd play sports or something. Or maybe just have a mustache. It's very flattering on you (referring to your picture) by the way. :)



Pssh..Emily Dickinson wishes she could write like my sister.



I shouldn't say that. She'll haunt me or something. There's that one black and white picture of Emily Dickinson that scares the hell out of me. Maybe since I saw it reciting a poem on YouTube before I went to bed one night.
Krimson
Krimson on Sep 13 '09 at 9:59pm
mostly older siblings are just there to hit you with things. That is like 90% of their job.
tanairi
tanairi on Sep 13 '09 at 10:24pm
Awesome analysis.

Amazing as alliteration.
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