WhitneyBeth
WhitneyBeth aka Whitney is a 26.4 year old girl, has been a member since June 11, 2007, has scored 4298 submissions, giving an average score of 2.49.
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  Mar 18 '08 by WhitneyBeth        29 Comments        Watch this
almost done scoring. i don't have much confidence that it's going to do well, but i tried to stretch my skills on this one, and i'm pretty pleased with the result.

thanks to everybody who helped me along the way. it really improved since the first version in subtle ways that i couldn't have fixed without you all.
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and alas, my computer is broken. again. sadly, i won't be around for a while, until my laptop keyboard and trackpad work again.

SoldierofGondor
SoldierofGondor on Mar 18 '08 at 11:13am
I think the mustache is too dark/awkward.
Perudoesitbetterthanu
   Perudoesitbetterthanu on Mar 18 '08 at 11:18am
maybe a different typeface or try making the type yourself?

it just seems out of place with the rest of the sketchy drawing. I like the design though and the idea is perfect for the contest.

ISABOA
ISABOA on Mar 18 '08 at 11:20am
HAHAHA -

it just shows how gradeschool I am that I find this so funny

if you wanted to add (which it need not) you could put a ben franklin looking guy standing behind him trying not to laugh -
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Mar 18 '08 at 11:23am
Handwritten type would be more appropriate I think. It would suit more the lines.
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Mar 18 '08 at 11:24am
ditto to peru I meant to say
jean_warhol
jean_warhol on Mar 18 '08 at 11:24am
i think its a good idea for the contest. The drawing of the man is a bit awkward though
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Mar 18 '08 at 11:29am
smaller on the center?
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 18 '08 at 11:32am
thanks guys... yeah. it'll probably go smaller once i put it on a photo model, and i'll change the type... probably do it myself.

jean, anything specifically awkward about the guy that i should change?
squeegebeckenheim
squeegebeckenheim on Mar 18 '08 at 11:34am
have you tried making the telephone darker? Right now it blends in with the man, especially the receiver.
jean_warhol
jean_warhol on Mar 18 '08 at 11:35am
i think for me, its mainly the facial expression
roadkill3d
   roadkill3d on Mar 18 '08 at 11:36am
I think what's awkward about the man is the eyes. He kind of looks like lifeless and no expression. The irises are resting at the center kinda like those mannequins.
squeegebeckenheim
squeegebeckenheim on Mar 18 '08 at 11:38am
Move his eyelids down so you see less of his iris. You usually can't see the top rounded edge of someone's irises unless they're making a weird face.
chelly
chelly on Mar 18 '08 at 11:42am
"yes, i'll hold"

hahahha
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 18 '08 at 1:39pm
thanks so so much guys. i'm going to make all the changes you suggested! i totally agree with those of you who mentioned the eyes. there was something weird about the face and i think you guys found it.
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 19 '08 at 1:35am
made some changes... what do you guys think? better?
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 19 '08 at 10:09am
good morning!
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 20 '08 at 12:09am
is it done? i think it might be...
DaniellesGarden
   DaniellesGarden on Mar 20 '08 at 12:15am
there is a spot at the top of his forehead where it meets the hat.. it looks pointy.. like maybe the hat should be a little bigger.. I dunno.

either way, I think this is a winner.. very funny and very appropriate for the contest.
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 21 '08 at 1:49am
yay! subbed! although the thumbnail isn't coming up for me for some reason. not sure if that's just my computer....
squatterjohn
squatterjohn on Mar 21 '08 at 1:55am
Can't see the thumbnail, but I can see the image if I click.
squatterjohn
squatterjohn on Mar 21 '08 at 1:55am
I can see it now! Spoke too soon.
Roostersauce
Roostersauce on Mar 21 '08 at 1:56am
I highly approve
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 21 '08 at 1:58am
thanks! i hope this one fares well... i am trying to improve my skills and it was a stretch.
2 days later
opifan64
   opifan64 on Mar 23 '08 at 4:38pm
haha... this is a really great idea! awesome.
againstbound
againstbound on Mar 23 '08 at 4:46pm
butcher moustache ftw!!!
3 days later
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 27 '08 at 1:29pm
thanks guys! it's finally up! i'm excited to see how it will do.
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Mar 27 '08 at 3:33pm
bump?
5 days later
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Apr 02 '08 at 2:20pm
broken keyboard and trackpad... posting from apple store. computer goes away tomorrow morning :-(
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Apr 03 '08 at 9:48am
bump for last day!!
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