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NYC
NYC aka B has been a member since June 2, 2007, has scored 171 submissions, giving an average score of 1.39, helping 3 designs get printed.
AIM: NYC
WIP: Slam Dunk
With the 'Critique the Critique' blog in mind, I have a design here

Check it out and let me know what you think either here or in the critique itself. Cheers m'dears.

valorandvellum
   valorandvellum on Jun 14 '07 at 10:20am
It's a nice idea... are you going to put more detail in the guy? Also, the glass looks like it's floating... maybe do some white lines to add in a pole or something.
NYC
NYC on Jun 14 '07 at 11:22am
Haven't really got enough colors to detail the guy, though I could use the darker Oreo color I suppose.
The Ending
The Ending on Jun 14 '07 at 11:24am
I really wasnt sure what was going on in the pic. I think it needs more detail overall. Keep going :-)
NYC
NYC on Jun 14 '07 at 2:14pm
I've added more detail, take a peek.
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