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has scored 1239 submissions, giving an average score of 1.71, helping 18 designs get printed.
Hooray! I think so too, and that's where the wreckage is being sketched in. I'm also considering either making the ghosts' tattery streamers longer or the bubble cloud a little denser by adding a bunch of very small bubbles. I think it needs something along those lines to give it the flow it's missing.
posted 6 years, 4 months ago in The Dire Wolf
One of the things I think might still be added is a sort of silhouette of wreckage on the bottom -- buckets, baskets, and barrels previously used in ill-fated attempts to cross the water, the ghosts flowing up and out of them.
There are a few specific things I'm not sure of, but I don't want to point them out in case it totally prejudices any critique you might want to give.
Inspired by these lyrics:
"In that September off Isle Aux Morts, desultory seas grew moreso through the night. And it made one think of tawny shores, an aspen trembling in tomorrow's thorough light...
Close to nowhere, halfway across... we were never more "here" -- expanse getting broader -- though bigger boats been done by less water.
Though better boats been done by this water
Though better boats been done by less water."
"i had assumed that ppl would wear the shirt while riding their bike and thus wanted to encourage using their arm signals for turns and stops"
That's mind blowing. Why don't I ever think that far ahead? I have so much to learn still...
posted 6 years, 4 months ago in something like this
It's kinda generic, I think. The linework is great, there's nothing wrong with your ability, but I can't see anything in this skull emblem that's different or more interesting than any other skull emblem design.
posted 6 years, 4 months ago in Skull
I'm going to echo the suggestions to perhaps make the stump taller and find some way to make the coffee IV blatantly obvious -- although, to be honest, the title and the brown colour should be enough to tip anyone off.
I love the caffeine high eyeballs, and the O.o (one eye bigger) idea is great. I've loved that look ever since Bill the Cat sported it.
posted 6 years, 4 months ago in Daywatch