Creepy.

But very nice! Kinda reminds me of the new Octopus shirt.

that's rad! i honestly have no criticisms. i think you could submit that right now and get printed. awesome drawing.

It's truly fantastic.

That's good stuff. I'd buy it.

i love the design but am unsure about the colour......



i'd possibly still buy it though

aw... how nice. thanks!



thomasmccluskey, what colours do you like better? i can change this up in five minutes flat since i have all the colours saved as symbols to seperate layers at the moment...

I'd like it in greys on black. Or creams on brown.

not sure



very helpful, eh?



dont change on my behalf get some more thoughts on colour. everyone seems to love the design.

Very Very Cool! I agree with thomas on the color thing. I''l put some thought into the colors and get back to you. Definetely a $5

i guess its' supposed to look like the floor but the monster seems a little flat. I think it could use some tentacles or arms flanking the body. it'd be cool to have some ground/grass too

Oh god, lots of Freudian stuff going on there. I like that.

Are you dutch or frisian?

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA



LIKE IT

DONT KNOW ABOUT THE MONSTERS TONGE ON THE KIDS MOUTH MAY BE ITS NOT necessary...

submit it the way it is! Nice work kid!

i love it, that tongue down the kids throat gives me a stomach ache.

okay, i've been messing around with the colours and have come up with some possibly more aesthetic combos, although suggestions are always appreciated!



the tongue in the mouth is... well... for one toup the Freudian factor as tesko pointed out, and also just to seperate it a bit from the usual "little thing being marauded by big thing" theme, but if too many people really find it uncomfortable, i could re-draw it easily.



phones -- you may be onto something. hmmmmmmm.



Daniel James Diggle: dutch.



sincere thanks to everyone for the suggestions and encouragement. i'll likely submit tomorrow or the day after.

I like this design. Not sure if I'd buy it, but I'd score it well.

you're amazingly good i like its style!

The one thing that gets me about the tongue in the mouth thing is that it reminds me of all that tentacle-sex stuff that comes out of Japanese Hentai cartoons....



and that isn't the kind of thing I would want to be reminded of every day...

It's not something I would wear, but it's good. I'd give it a 4 or a 5.

Mmm, tentacle hentai.

cool, just don't put it on the bottom of the shirt due to "shapes"

hahaha... yeah, that crossed my mind. i was thinking putting the kid in the usual "centred-on-chest" position and letting the monster extend from there.

its great! Do it! Do it!

I think it's a cool design and well done, I'd just never wear it on a shirt.

how can something so creepy come from such a sweet loking girl?





I don't normally like creepy thhings but this one makes me happy for some reason

The image could very nearly give me nightmares. Good job.

for me, the creepiness comes from the weird relatonship between the world and the child. is the world about to eat the child? is the world feeding the child? suppose we are the child? then do you see why this image works so well?



woof! you go! speaking of color, the palate you're working with minimizes the difference between the child and the world: blues and greens shared, etc.... if you want to explore color alternatives, i'd suggest keeping the total palate relatively flat across the image, but still try to find some way to use color to distinguish between the world/background and the child. or the world and the background/child. if you go down that path, you’ll want to see how the various color separations feel relative to what you’re trying to say with the image.



but this is great! good luck!

Awesome- kinda cute but scary... I like the colours myself!

Don't like the colours... The design is definately good. I wouldn't wear it, but I'm sure someone else would. :)

coooooooooool design...great style...cool. but probably not something i would wear though.

looks just like that 70's french animated film "fantastic planet"

I'd give it a $5 if it comes "in greys on black. Or creams on brown."

this is cool jett i would wear itin the original colours!

I like it, submit it already.

yeah, what happened to the submission? let's see it!

got busy designing band merch, and got to a point where i couldn't stand looking at a computer screen anymore. over it now though! will mess around with the colours when i get home fromtonight's gig.



thanks a million for all the suggestions, guys.

Yuup, I agree. Submit it. Maybe use a bit more contrasting colours to give it some extra spice, but further I have nothing to say, It's cool!

I like your style and this shirt.



My only gripe is the monsters tongue going into the kids mouth. Looks like something I'd see in a tentacle rape scene.



Outside of that looks great. Hope to see some more submissions by you!

fantastic!!!