special  k
special k aka Kasia is a girl, has been a member since January 4, 2007, has scored 2721 submissions, giving an average score of 2.62.
  Jun 27 '07 by special k        15 Comments        Watch this
alright, so i just wanted to see if anyone else has anything to say about what im hoping will be the final version of my design for the eagle vs shark contest.
yes i know its very literal, but please, i just want thoughts on the appearance, or what i can do to make it look more appealing.
i dont plan on changing the idea behind the design to make it more subtle.

sorry if i sound stuck up, its just that a number of people have told me to just completely end all thoughts of that one, and start a new one.

thanks in advance!

linky

special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 3:38pm
for those too, eh, lazy (?) to go there, here is the design, any thoughts will be greatly appreciated!

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special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 3:42pm
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special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 3:45pm
no brave souls?
or am i just like the plague on threadless?!
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 3:54pm
nothing still?
i apologize for the constant checkups, and bumps.
im just very bored and eager to get this subbed before i forget about it.
wotto
   wotto on Jun 27 '07 at 4:01pm
you should use the proper tee outline. It would look better
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 4:02pm
i will
i was just being lazy.

thanks!
wotto
   wotto on Jun 27 '07 at 4:05pm
I hate to say this but laziness will not win hearts or minds on here. Have you tried using the critique section??
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 4:07pm
im using it, and there is a link to the critiques.
i just wanted general thoughts, concerning the design most of all.
i will fix up those little details, but i just to know if the design itself should be editted.

thanks again!
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 4:37pm
new version is going up soon,
cleaned up and not lazy, at least i hope.

til then, bump!
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 5:27pm
bump
new version is up, revisit critique by using the link at the top.
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 5:59pm
bump
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 6:47pm
anyone at all?!
bsweber
   bsweber on Jun 27 '07 at 6:50pm
personally, i would like it without the makeup on the shark. i think the flipper is well done.

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because conceptually this is what you're up against, as far as eagles with scuba gear
special  k
special k on Jun 27 '07 at 6:53pm
ive had mine up for longer! ;)
i was really peeved.
my sub has been up in the critiques for, what, say 19 days now.
due to a lack of responses i hadnt done anything more.
and then i had a bunch of stuff that left me pooped and not working on the design.
regardless of that design, i still want to sub mine.
just after i get some more feedback.
this is driving me nuts!

all in all, though, thanks for being one of the few to respond.

ps: the makeup shows that its a girl, i didnt think it was that obvious without it.
:(

thanks anyway!
bsweber
   bsweber on Jun 27 '07 at 7:40pm
yeah ive had ideas that have come up before i can finish mine too-it happens. i made the comment about the makeup for this reason: the makeup identifies the shark as the female, but the eagle doesn't really have a coresponding element that identifies it as a male.

my suggestion for you, if you're looking for more feedback, would be to start a new critique with just the latest version. sometimes just starting fresh helps.
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