mooseinmyshoe
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  Mar 05 '08 by mooseinmyshoe        9 Comments        Watch this
If you are punctuating a poem,

can you use commas and not periods?

or if you put commas in, do you have to have periods as well?

valorandvellum
   valorandvellum on Mar 05 '08 at 10:57am
I think you can use both? Not sure.
Hero Status
Hero Status on Mar 05 '08 at 10:58am
dude, its a poem. punctuation is completely optional.
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hanzabean
hanzabean on Mar 05 '08 at 10:59am
What hero said.
Some use the end of the line as a "stop," rather than a period or whatever. Most poems, though, end with a period [from what I have seen].
mooseinmyshoe
mooseinmyshoe on Mar 05 '08 at 10:59am
Oh yea, I guess that makes sense.

I just don't want periods in there, but it only makes sense if there are pause markers, but then it looks weird with only commas scattered about.

Thanks guys!
againstbound
againstbound on Mar 05 '08 at 11:03am
just put whatever you want, futurists replaced regular punctuation with musical signs (is it signs?)

and a while ago i wrote a short story with no punctuation at all, except for the final period
againstbound
againstbound on Mar 05 '08 at 11:04am
and i think commas are more common than periods in poetry
mooseinmyshoe
mooseinmyshoe on Mar 05 '08 at 11:07am
Notes maybe, I think. Music notes?

This helps a lot.

You guys are great!
againstbound
againstbound on Mar 05 '08 at 11:08am
not so much notes, i just cant remember the name in english, like keys? (cant remember the correct word u_u)
mooseinmyshoe
mooseinmyshoe on Mar 05 '08 at 11:20am
I think I know what you mean. Don't worry about it, haha. English is my first language and I still can't think of the right words sometimes, lol
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