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aka Matt Lehoux
is a 27.55 year old
and has been a part of the Threadless community for 7 years!
has scored 406 submissions, giving an average score of 2.91, helping 11 designs get printed.
Seriously any comment at all would be greatly appreciated...
posted 5 years, 4 months ago in Now that I've got your interest...
I'm looking for a lot of help with this one, this is just a basic sketched idea (incomplete I might add). The idea is to have the cheese holding something dangerous to the mice; poison? knife? fork?
Need suggestions for that, also need to decide whether it should stay black and white sketched, or if it should get flushed out into colour. I mocked it up in some colour previously, and can upload a colour version if that's where people are leaning. More or less anything is up for change, positions, placements, items, etc.
I appreciate any and all advice/tips/criticism, constructive or otherwise. If you take a look please leave me with any impressions, so I can build on this.
Thanks in advance!
Ok, so a minor change to go with a couple suggestions, just switched the lower cloud colour for the main one/ring. Hope this is what people had in mind. I can't get the contrast I had in #3 as the shirts just don't come in that shade.
Thanks for all the input, hopefully I'm working in the right direction.
posted 5 years, 8 months ago in Knukes!
Bit of a resub here, but hopefully you can look past that. I hope you like it!
I agree on the baby needing a new colour... it kinda looks like a ghost as is. Other than that I wouldn't worry about more background detail. Change up some of the smaller stuff first, maybe switch out the shirt colour. With a new build you/we could see what looks better/worse.
posted 5 years, 8 months ago in Mourning the living