Ok so is this really THAT bad?

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now I've got that off my chest I will be leaving for a while before I say something I will regret.

What do you guys consider a good % for a slogan?

I still have 3 designs "Pending" what chances do you guys think I have of them even getting past the panel of judges or am I just wasting my time?
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This last one is a change of style for me in an attempt to just get something anything accepted so I've tried to do somwthing like some of the other stuff I see on hee rathe than my own style which is obviously not liked by the panel of judges.
Comments please?

Ok I've just had another 2 submissions declined for the reason of being rejected by the initial panel of judges.


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Exactly the same as the ickle green man as for reasons for decline.

and to be honest I wasn't that happy with how this has turned out anyway, but thought if I submitted some stuff that was OBVIOUSLY shite so other stuff gets past, lol.

Another of my submissions which has been declined for the reason: Sorry, your design was not accepted by the initial panel of Judges. Even though your design may be submitted properly, we do decline some submissions for poor design. All designs are pre-screened by a panel of Judges before put into the running. Please feel free to create another design and try again.

So any pointer would be appreciated so I can start doing good design that will be accepted without just copying what everyone else does and going cutsey outlines of fluffy animals holding ballons./pirates/ninjas etc. etc.

ok following advice from Paul & Amy here is the first design I submitted but the Judges felt wasn't good enough for threadless, can anyone tell me where I went wrong with this ?

well I'm playing the waiting game now to find out if I will finally get some of my submissions approved!

I find it odd how some stuff gets picked when stuff I do gets declined for reasons which seem rather subjective, like the judges just didn't like it! WTF! yet I see designs which are clearly at odds with the submission guidelines and fulfill several Decline Reasons yet still get through!!

OK Rant over, back to drinking too much coffee while waiting for my designs to be either picked or chucked!!