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aka Mister Nil
and has been a part of the Threadless community for 7 years, 1 month!
has scored 817 submissions, giving an average score of 1.07, helping 10 designs get printed.
great work. you should be proud of this one.
posted 4 years, 10 months ago in Autumn Chameleons
I like the subtleness of this one. I get the concept and identify with it as I have moved over 15 times in 7 years. I like the use of greys but think there could be a bit more detail in the backpack so it relates a more to the person. Not too much, just so one doesn't look like a photo and one like a vector silhouette. I like the placement but think if you moved it just a tiny bit to the right so the home bubble was centered up, it would help emphasize your message. As I am not sure what the type says, I think you could get rid of it. And for the punctuation inside the bubble, be decisive - use an ellipsis (...) before and end on a question mark, or begin with the home and end with the ellipsis. Last thing would be to maybe hint at a background/location. A subtle horizon line or maybe a gradation printed as a belt print first could be cool - just to give a sense of place but it's a minor detail. That's my honest feedback. Merci pour l'invitation critiquer. Ton design est bien ça et j'espére que tu ganges le competition parce que je veux ça teesh! A+
posted 4 years, 10 months ago in SEARCHING FOR A ROOF
haha! thanks! sorry to be a bug. i just got laid off an have too much time on my hands! i'll do better.
posted 4 years, 10 months ago in Sink or Swim
i think you could choose a better typeface. something more timeless like bembo or baskerville. The leading is too tight for this to be a pleasant read and the tracking could use some work. also, i think the centered type shows indecisiveness. maybe justify it all so that it take on a rectangular shape. this will let you play with the placement a bit more and maybe create a progressive relationship between length messages. hope this helps. can't wait for v2! thanks for stopping by!
posted 4 years, 10 months ago in Neat. Check out mine!
Vote for me too!
posted 4 years, 10 months ago in Angry Kid