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dacat aka Jack is a boy, has been a member since November 10, 2006, has scored 24,784 submissions, giving an average score of 2.58, helping 729 designs get printed.

Jan 08 '09 by dacat
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I have a feeling of a low score, but I would like to know what I could have done to improve it...thanks very much!

Letters from H - Threadless T-shirts, Nude No More

Big carp:

Zip mock-up (thanks Maltz):
Zip Mock-up (Maltz)

sonmi on Jan 08 '09 at 11:33pm

awesome!!! so well drawn.

herky on Jan 08 '09 at 11:35pm

Wow incredible work. Especially love the turtle and carp.

sonmi on Jan 08 '09 at 11:36pm

the gradients are spot on, too

dacat on Jan 08 '09 at 11:38pm

Thanks guys, the carp took especially long with all those damn scales. Sonmi...I want your JOT sub printed NOW!!!

sonmi on Jan 08 '09 at 11:40pm

the scales are ridiculously good!!

:DD

igo2cairo on Jan 08 '09 at 11:44pm

Beautiful!! The style of this blows me away, stunning line-work.

dacat on Jan 08 '09 at 11:47pm

Thanks Terry! Oh and THANKS for the Christmas card!!!

roadkill3d on Jan 08 '09 at 11:58pm

You turned common Japanese elements into something radical. Stunning work Jack!

kooky love on Jan 09 '09 at 12:21am

GREAT $5 indeed!

dacat on Jan 09 '09 at 1:09am

Cool guys, thanks!

CallMeSteven on Jan 09 '09 at 1:12am

great idea, and well drawn

ISABOA on Jan 09 '09 at 1:13am

wow - this is crazy cool

excellent

ivejustquitsmoking on Jan 09 '09 at 1:18am

that's awesome!

Bio-bot 9000 on Jan 09 '09 at 1:23am

wow, pretty much any one of those would be an awesome shirt on their own!

Bio-bot 9000 on Jan 09 '09 at 1:23am

i especially like the turtle and carp

dacat on Jan 09 '09 at 3:41am

Thank you fellas, time for bed bump!

dacat on Jan 09 '09 at 12:48pm

Updated with zip hoody!

dacat on Jan 09 '09 at 7:34pm

Me too!

3 days later

dacat on Jan 12 '09 at 7:45pm

Yay it's up today :-)

ivejustquitsmoking on Jan 12 '09 at 7:48pm

yay! I'll go vote a fat 5 now

dacat on Jan 12 '09 at 7:52pm

Thanks Marco!

dacat on Jan 12 '09 at 9:36pm

Dinner bump

dacat on Jan 13 '09 at 1:38pm

Voting time!

dacat on Jan 13 '09 at 4:00pm

Boy, it's a slow day today!

dacat on Jan 13 '09 at 7:38pm

About to go home from work bump

dacat on Jan 13 '09 at 8:47pm

Yes, I like fish

dacat on Jan 14 '09 at 5:02pm

~~crap~~carp time!

dacat on Jan 14 '09 at 8:10pm

Back to the drawing board!

dacat on Jan 16 '09 at 6:15pm

I'm thinking I messed up on this one...would appreciate improvement feedback...thanks!

dacat on Jan 17 '09 at 3:18am

late night bump!

olie! on Jan 17 '09 at 3:27am

hmm. . . personally I just think the way you cut off the different elements like the sky, grass tree branches and waves and put them in a boxy grid doesn't look extremely flattering on the shirt. . . but honestly I don't even know if I could think of a way I would've done it any better without dissolving the concept. It might have just been the nature of the elements you were dealing with, if you get my drift.

Also the fact that the geisha "I" is on the side and kinda detached from the rest kinda makes it hard to see what you're saying. . . but again I don't know how I would've fixed it.

Sorry dude. I know that probably doesn't help you at all. If it's any consolation I like the details and colors and you did a great job emulating his style!

brentendo on Jan 17 '09 at 3:27am

I think its great though I kinda wished that the 'I' wasn't seperate from everything else

The detail in the lettering is great though, I'm a huge fan of the artist so I would probably buy this

dacat on Jan 17 '09 at 3:49am

Thanks Olie for the feedback!!!

I totally agree...I had so many problems with the layout...it kept spelling "SUK" and "USA", ha ha ha! I chalk this up as an exercise in examining Hokusai's style (which I love). I'll probably re-work it someday, but it was good to practice and draw this for fun anyway.

Thanks brentendo!

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