WanderingBert
WanderingBert aka David Creighton-Pester is a 23.91 year old boy, has been a member since November 6, 2006, has scored 28796 submissions, giving an average score of 1.92.
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  Feb 03 '08 by WanderingBert        29 Comments        Watch this
I'd really like some feedback on my latest WIP. Do you think it's ready to submit or should I change a few things? Any help would be much appreciated.

*UPDATE*
Subbed!
Hunting for A Healthy Alternative - Threadless, Best T-shirts Ever


Healthy Hunting



A couple of colour variations-
Healthy Hunting Colour Variations


Thanks.

Maltzmania
Maltzmania on Feb 03 '08 at 3:31pm
PRINT
jean_warhol
jean_warhol on Feb 03 '08 at 3:34pm
i think its ready
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 3:34pm
haha, thanks Maltz!
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 3:34pm
and JW!
LINK2DPAST
LINK2DPAST on Feb 03 '08 at 3:35pm
It looks best on the lavender background. Or it might be gray. I'm outside right now. Either way, it looks good.
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 3:37pm
I'm glad you're liking it this way, it's a bit of a different approach than I normally take. Especially just semi colouring the cavemen. I had to resist my urge to fully colour them in, but i'm glad with the result.
jean_warhol
jean_warhol on Feb 03 '08 at 3:39pm
resist the urge, my friend
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 3:50pm
ay ay captain!
LINK2DPAST
LINK2DPAST on Feb 03 '08 at 3:54pm
Where did you get this idea?
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 3:56pm
I can't remember now. I've had it sitting in my sketch book for a while. I think it was originally from a documentary on TV or something like that.
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 3:57pm
actually I think the line was like "hunting for a healthy alternative" or something along those lines.

Do you think that would make a better title?
jean_warhol
jean_warhol on Feb 03 '08 at 3:59pm
bert, want to do a collab.... i had an i thought fits your style
LINK2DPAST
LINK2DPAST on Feb 03 '08 at 3:59pm
Yes that would be better. I really need to come up with some good concepts. Ever since I started wanting to design here I haven't come up with a good idea.
Robsoul
   Robsoul on Feb 03 '08 at 4:00pm
... really needs some tusks and a trunk, not to mention a tail... I know that seems too much but seriously, what apple doesn't have that?

very cool.

atomic child
atomic child on Feb 03 '08 at 4:02pm
oh man that is sweet
atomic child
atomic child on Feb 03 '08 at 4:02pm
and i think just add tusks
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 4:05pm
LINK2DPAST- It's all about how you think about things. Quite often I get ideas through taking things more literally than intended such as the hunting idea for this one. Another way is to mix 2 different scenarios in to one so that you get a funny outcome. When I started I didn't have many ideas, but I wrote/ sketched them in a scrapbook and I got lots the more I did it. Maybe that could work for you. Good luck!

JW- Sure! I've got my whole job search thing going on at the moment, so if you're not in any rush i'd def be keen!
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 4:06pm
Rob- I tried tusks and a tail, but it really was too much :)

Thanks too AC
jean_warhol
jean_warhol on Feb 03 '08 at 4:06pm
no rush lol
Jemae
   Jemae on Feb 03 '08 at 4:08pm
interesting design/idea! :D
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 4:19pm
Thanks for the comments everyone!

Which colour shirt is the prefered?

White, sand, or creme? I'm leaning toward sand, but I was wondering what you all thought would be best.
atomic child
atomic child on Feb 03 '08 at 4:25pm
i think creme is the best
ilovedoodle
   ilovedoodle on Feb 03 '08 at 4:26pm
love it in white shirt, nice work wanderingbert!
LINK2DPAST
LINK2DPAST on Feb 03 '08 at 4:29pm
Wow, what I thought was lavender or gray on my sister's laptop is actually sand... It looks equally good on sand and creme.
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 4:37pm
hmmm, one for each. I think i'll put it on sand for the main, and also show it in the other two colours.
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 03 '08 at 5:38pm
thanks for the help everybody, it is now subbed.
Hunting for A Healthy Alternative - Threadless, Best T-shirts Ever
Afromation
Afromation on Feb 03 '08 at 9:21pm
What...this is sick man you always come with the favor concepts, this is a print.
Jackanapes mk.II
Jackanapes mk.II on Feb 03 '08 at 9:24pm
Dude that's sweet.
Jemae
   Jemae on Feb 03 '08 at 9:43pm
great! ...all the best to you man! :)
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