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WanderingBert aka David Creighton-Pester is a 23.85 year old boy, has been a member since November 6, 2006, has scored 27111 submissions, giving an average score of 1.91.

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Nov 10 '07 by WanderingBert

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HELP ME! - Xmas WIP

Here's whats going down so far. It's pretty much complete. I'll sub this version shortly unless anyone can think of any brilliant addition that could help this design. Help meh pleeease.

Thankya.

speedyjvw on Nov 10 '07 at 10:29pm

yes

SoldierofGondor on Nov 10 '07 at 10:31pm

Sweet.

I'm liking the hill and houses.

xiv on Nov 10 '07 at 10:33pm

nice

WanderingBert on Nov 10 '07 at 10:33pm

Thanks guys. Should be pretty sweet once I get some colours going.

backtozero on Nov 11 '07 at 8:43am

coool!

phones on Nov 11 '07 at 8:45am

"hmmmm....needs more dog"

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 4:34pm

Super secret squirrel sneak peak Sunday bump

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 5:52pm

Super secret squirrel sneak peak Sunday bump mark 2

Todow on Nov 11 '07 at 5:56pm

Are there still going to be boats?

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 6:01pm

Yep, but i'm gonna change them from my original sketch. I'm trying to work on them so they'll look more like presents under the tree.

Todow on Nov 11 '07 at 6:02pm

Its cool, it kinda reminds me of christmas candy land.

xiv on Nov 11 '07 at 6:04pm

the ribbons should be that fancy felt-like ink.

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 6:05pm

Good idea

FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 11 '07 at 6:06pm

*squeezes into hiding place behind the school bushes*

What's so secretive about this?

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 6:25pm

I could tell you but then... ... ... Ok, i'll tell.

It's secret for a number of reasons-
1) It's not finished yet
2) Because it makes people wanna look,
3) and makes them feel special to have seen such a secret.

btw, Y'all better feel special to bear witness to this, yo.

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 9:12pm

Bump for possibly final version. Any good ideas to add?

the czar on Nov 11 '07 at 9:14pm

Style is awesome. Love the look of the houses

roadkill3d on Nov 11 '07 at 9:16pm

noice! one final red ball ornament thingy near the top to balance it out? just a thought

roadkill3d on Nov 11 '07 at 9:17pm

i mean on the left side where there are two houses (blue and green)...

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 9:18pm

Yeah, I was thinking that earlier but forgot to add it. It would def balance it out better- Thanks for reminding me :)

roadkill3d on Nov 11 '07 at 9:20pm

you got it dood! SUB IT!

drmtama2 on Nov 11 '07 at 9:20pm

star on top should be yellow!!!

nice bert!!!

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 9:23pm

Do you really think the big star should be yellow? I was wondering about it but thought I'd keep it a bit more subtle, and tied to the other stars.

Flying Mouse on Nov 11 '07 at 9:58pm

Beautiful concept, I like this.

sugarless on Nov 11 '07 at 9:59pm

my initial thought was a sleigh w/ reindeer, but i think it is fine as is. but add some cool inks. :)

i really like it though. hope it wins !!

Todow on Nov 11 '07 at 10:03pm

the boats bug me.

drmtama2 on Nov 11 '07 at 10:06pm

i just figured that it would make your concept stand out even more...

:)

WanderingBert on Nov 11 '07 at 10:08pm

Thanks guys!

Todow- What should I change?

artdrops on Nov 11 '07 at 10:10pm

It's a place i'd like to live. Colors are great! I would make the star bright so it sticks out more.

2 days later

aust1n on Nov 14 '07 at 9:18pm

win.

aust1n on Nov 14 '07 at 9:19pm

and some foil would make it look like tinsil (sp?)

that'd be sweet as well

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