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Thank you for your feedback! I feel I disagree with you on whether or not monsters are intense...perhaps my monsters aren't very intense, since I drew them in a more silly manner. But monsters in general, I think, are--which is why the idea came to me. & since Threadless is such a fan of wordplay, I figured I'd give this pun a go!
There are plenty of intelligent & quirky designs--most of the time the pun or joke is presented, not only through image, but through text on the shirt as well.
Or, better yet, having simply the title of the design explain/better represent the design is just as helpful--& you don't have to worry about throwing in words & possibly destroying your composition.
But, yeah, even after reading up on graphene (an extremely thin sheet of carbon), I'm only coming up with...perhaps the bees were fooled by this misleading substance at an atomic-scale, & are retreating due to said deception?
If that's the case, I may add something as simple as: the top bees smiling & the bottom bees frowning? Or even more simply (does it get more basic than the atomic level of things? har har), just give the bottom bees some angry brows. haha
Just suggestions! Anywho, very nice design. I can totally imagine this as an official design, you may just have to help the voters along! :) Good luck!
Could you explain the connection between digging & the presence of the gnome?
A little more decoration (like mushrooms) could be helpful to the composition--
maybe tossing them in or around the dirt lettering (if you go that direction).
Love your little gnome guy! Wonderful character design. :)
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