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pickledbib aka georgie p has been a member since August 16, 2006, has scored 44,875 submissions, giving an average score of 2.04, helping 708 designs get printed.

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Oct 18 '07 by pickledbib
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In The Palm Of Her Hands... zero days left... please vote

Please vote and comment... and thanks to all who helped with the design... much appreciated.

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Here's some alternate design options.

starr226 on Oct 18 '07 at 12:46am

the contrast in style from the top half to the bottom half really keeps this from being very successful, IMO. really, I guess more than anything it's the crying face. you should just go ahead and go full out on a realistically rendered face like the figure below.

the arrangement and overall concept choice is really nice, though - and the colors are well chosen.

ladrones on Oct 18 '07 at 1:06am

i think its ready to go

EXCEPT for the girls face.

i like the idea that it may be simplified, but its clashing pretty hard to me.

i think if you make the face more realistic, but still ultra stylized with minimal lines, this thing can be callled done

pickledbib on Oct 18 '07 at 6:07am

thanks for the feedback guys... I thought the meld wasn't as good as it should be, and the tears may be construed as being a little imo... but maybe could get away with it :-).

I'll see how I go timewise... thanks again.

spiderflux on Oct 18 '07 at 6:22am

well since you're saying this still needs work i don't know what you're planning on changing, so not sure how to critique this...i will say this is a cool idea, and the lower portion is well executed so you're definitely on the right track.

maybe make the gir's head a bit smaller as it seems overwhelming though. are you going to develope the face more? i'd really like to see this finished, hope you get the time.

pickledbib on Oct 18 '07 at 5:06pm

just taking a quick peak from work... any other feedback? before I unclog the blogs...

and I apologise for placing this in the general section of the blogs but sometimes this is the only way to get some feedback.

btw: if I get time I'll probably change the girls face

zipperking on Oct 18 '07 at 5:18pm

yeah, change the girls face, and this will be one great sub.

pickledbib on Oct 18 '07 at 5:21pm

thanks zipperking... hopefully I'll get time

herky on Oct 18 '07 at 5:24pm

I agree that the face should be a little more realistic, lovely concept and illustration.

5 days later

pickledbib on Oct 23 '07 at 7:26pm

Thanks for all the feedback... found some time to refine it.

I've come this far so I thought it deserved a sub.

My prefernce is option B or D... Which one is yours?

pickledbib on Oct 23 '07 at 7:46pm

bump

bsweber on Oct 23 '07 at 7:56pm

I like B over D

but my first choice would be A!

bsweber on Oct 23 '07 at 7:57pm

nice work though, i really love that hat

stevetrpi on Oct 23 '07 at 7:57pm

nikolina100 on Oct 23 '07 at 7:59pm

it's so hard to pick, but the yellow color in both A & C looks great on the blue background, but I think I like the hair filled in (A) just a bit more....beautiful design :)

nonplussed on Oct 23 '07 at 8:05pm

A is my favorite. The hair color really pops against the background.

pickledbib on Oct 23 '07 at 9:55pm

thanks guys...

spiderflux on Oct 24 '07 at 6:08am

i'm always the minority vote...i like c the best. makes the girl look more angelic, non-human, ethereal, or something.

fc gravy on Oct 24 '07 at 6:27am

option A or D

deboraborialis on Oct 24 '07 at 6:35am

D for me.

deboraborialis on Oct 24 '07 at 6:36am

Oh, and I like what you've done with the face.

chelly on Oct 24 '07 at 8:45am

d

i found it to be the only one in which i didn't focus on the girl but on the entire design

mrwalrusface on Oct 24 '07 at 8:55am

C c C

mrwalrusface on Oct 24 '07 at 8:57am

i like the original drawing of the girl in the clouds but the above version works with the hat illustration much better

pickledbib on Oct 24 '07 at 5:04pm

one last bump... I was all set to sub A, but those last comments have thrown me a little... anyone else care to comment?

current blogger's preferences:

A = 4.5

B = 0

C = 2

D= 2.5

Khol on Oct 24 '07 at 5:07pm

I'm for B

:)

shakethesheets on Oct 24 '07 at 5:11pm

bsweber on Oct 24 '07 at 5:52pm

A! oh wait, already voted

pickledbib on Oct 24 '07 at 6:32pm

lucky last bump... I'm going with A unless an overwhelming support comes in for the other versions.

current blogger's preferences:

A = 4.5

B = 1 :-)

C = 2

D= 3.5