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pickledbib
pickledbib aka georgie p has been a member since August 16, 2006, has scored 44,875 submissions, giving an average score of 2.04, helping 708 designs get printed.
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Please vote and comment... and thanks to all who helped with the design... much appreciated.

In The Palm Of Her Hands - Threadless, Best T-shirts Ever

Here's some alternate design options.

In the palm of her hands_FINAL-OPTIONS

starr226
   starr226 on Oct 18 '07 at 12:46am
the contrast in style from the top half to the bottom half really keeps this from being very successful, IMO. really, I guess more than anything it's the crying face. you should just go ahead and go full out on a realistically rendered face like the figure below.

the arrangement and overall concept choice is really nice, though - and the colors are well chosen.
ladrones
   ladrones on Oct 18 '07 at 1:06am
i think its ready to go

EXCEPT for the girls face.



i like the idea that it may be simplified, but its clashing pretty hard to me.



i think if you make the face more realistic, but still ultra stylized with minimal lines, this thing can be callled done
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 18 '07 at 6:07am
thanks for the feedback guys... I thought the meld wasn't as good as it should be, and the tears may be construed as being a little imo... but maybe could get away with it :-).



I'll see how I go timewise... thanks again.
spiderflux
spiderflux on Oct 18 '07 at 6:22am
well since you're saying this still needs work i don't know what you're planning on changing, so not sure how to critique this...i will say this is a cool idea, and the lower portion is well executed so you're definitely on the right track.



maybe make the gir's head a bit smaller as it seems overwhelming though. are you going to develope the face more? i'd really like to see this finished, hope you get the time.



pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 18 '07 at 5:06pm
just taking a quick peak from work... any other feedback? before I unclog the blogs...



and I apologise for placing this in the general section of the blogs but sometimes this is the only way to get some feedback.



btw: if I get time I'll probably change the girls face
zipperking
   zipperking on Oct 18 '07 at 5:18pm
yeah, change the girls face, and this will be one great sub.
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 18 '07 at 5:21pm
thanks zipperking... hopefully I'll get time
herky
   herky on Oct 18 '07 at 5:24pm
I agree that the face should be a little more realistic, lovely concept and illustration.
5 days later
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 23 '07 at 7:26pm
Thanks for all the feedback... found some time to refine it.

I've come this far so I thought it deserved a sub.



My prefernce is option B or D... Which one is yours?
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 23 '07 at 7:46pm
bump
bsweber
   bsweber on Oct 23 '07 at 7:56pm
I like B over D





but my first choice would be A!
bsweber
   bsweber on Oct 23 '07 at 7:57pm
nice work though, i really love that hat
stevetrpi
stevetrpi on Oct 23 '07 at 7:57pm
A
nikolina100
nikolina100 on Oct 23 '07 at 7:59pm
it's so hard to pick, but the yellow color in both A & C looks great on the blue background, but I think I like the hair filled in (A) just a bit more....beautiful design :)
nonplussed
nonplussed on Oct 23 '07 at 8:05pm
A is my favorite. The hair color really pops against the background.
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 23 '07 at 9:55pm
thanks guys...
spiderflux
spiderflux on Oct 24 '07 at 6:08am
i'm always the minority vote...i like c the best. makes the girl look more angelic, non-human, ethereal, or something.
fc gravy
fc gravy on Oct 24 '07 at 6:27am
option A or D
deboraborialis
deboraborialis on Oct 24 '07 at 6:35am
D for me.
deboraborialis
deboraborialis on Oct 24 '07 at 6:36am
Oh, and I like what you've done with the face.
chelly
chelly on Oct 24 '07 at 8:45am
d



i found it to be the only one in which i didn't focus on the girl but on the entire design
mrwalrusface
   mrwalrusface on Oct 24 '07 at 8:55am
C c C
mrwalrusface
   mrwalrusface on Oct 24 '07 at 8:57am
i like the original drawing of the girl in the clouds but the above version works with the hat illustration much better
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 24 '07 at 5:04pm
one last bump... I was all set to sub A, but those last comments have thrown me a little... anyone else care to comment?



current blogger's preferences:

A = 4.5

B = 0

C = 2

D= 2.5

Khol
Khol on Oct 24 '07 at 5:07pm
I'm for B



:)
shakethesheets
shakethesheets on Oct 24 '07 at 5:11pm
D
bsweber
   bsweber on Oct 24 '07 at 5:52pm
A! oh wait, already voted
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 24 '07 at 6:32pm
lucky last bump... I'm going with A unless an overwhelming support comes in for the other versions.



current blogger's preferences:

A = 4.5

B = 1 :-)

C = 2

D= 3.5

MooseDinner
MooseDinner on Oct 24 '07 at 6:39pm
D, then A. If you choose C, I think you should make the hands/arms and face the same color.
Maltzmania
Maltzmania on Oct 24 '07 at 6:45pm
C :) this is sweet
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 25 '07 at 5:32pm
thanks guys... the final decision was a sneaky amalgam of A & D.
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 25 '07 at 10:24pm
one bump
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 26 '07 at 8:23am
two bump
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 26 '07 at 5:30pm
three bump
avalanche_lily
avalanche_lily on Oct 26 '07 at 5:31pm
D
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 27 '07 at 8:19am
four
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 27 '07 at 5:41pm
five bump
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 29 '07 at 12:29am
six bump
pickledbib
pickledbib on Oct 29 '07 at 4:17pm
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pickledbib
pickledbib on Nov 01 '07 at 5:09am
eight bump
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