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aka David Hayward
is a 33.66 year old
and has been a part of the Threadless community for 7 years, 5 months!
has scored 283 submissions, giving an average score of 1.99, helping 4 designs get printed.
It's a good idea.
I think the footprints could work if they didn't merge with the white box so awkwardly; it's still very obvious as a white box because the curves of the feet don't flow into it.
Compositionally, it would also work better if the bloodline were positioned 1/3 from the top or bottom of the shirt, rather than halfway.
posted 7 years, 5 months ago in Tap Trap
I think it works very well with the circle; but then again I'm from the UK where there are no Target stores ;)
The purity and crispness of the cirle is a good contrast to the swirlies, and makes it seem like the topmost child is dreaming everything else.
The blues and white are all good too. I'd buy it in those colours, with the cirle.
posted 7 years, 5 months ago in My Inner Child