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slickhop
slickhop aka dave is a boy, has been a member since June 19, 2006, has scored 1,211 submissions, giving an average score of 1.93, helping 26 designs get printed.
i'm still not a huge fan of this .. i mean the image isn't even strong enough to stand on its own (witness the sign in background) and the joke falls flat.

other folks thoughts?

Amunro
Amunro on Oct 08 '07 at 5:24pm
The sign is a necessary part of the design. Instead of weakening it, the sign makes the overall design much stronger. The reason the image isn't strong enough to stand on its own is that the content is slightly too obscure without signage.



And while the joke isn't amazingly funny, it has a simple charm to it. I wouldn't say it falls flat just because it doesn't actually make you laugh. The adorable little peas in their cute little helmets make the joke funny enough to warrant a smile.



Also, it's important to remember that it's a shirt design, not a picture as such. On a shirt, sometimes a simple, cute picture with a tiny gag is more effective than a big complicated masterpiece.



I gotta say, I like the shirt.. although the idea wasn't the most original or funny, it was very well executed.
7 days later
PFK
PFK on Oct 16 '07 at 12:50am
I'm with Amunro, the peas decked out in their little helmets are cute.
6 days later
slickhop
slickhop on Oct 22 '07 at 9:00am
Articulate response. I maintain my position, but I'll let it lie. :)
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