Profile for Jemae - HELP me to improve this.....

Jemae aka Noor is a boy, has been a member since June 15, 2006, has scored 6,030 submissions, giving an average score of 4.53, helping 527 designs get printed.

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Apr 14 '07 by Jemae
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HELP me to improve this.....

This my upcoming sub call "F1 CARRIER".
Suggestion/idea are welcome to improve this, maybe on tee color/desing/placement. Right now suggested tee color are denim/royal blue/sugestone.

THANKS! =)

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Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 11:15am

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hxcassandra on Apr 14 '07 at 11:18am

i don't think the airplane fits in being that close up, maybe move it back a bit

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 11:29am

Agreed & I'll do that...thanks hxcassandra!

Flying Mouse on Apr 14 '07 at 11:29am

Jamea, this is a crazy work! I can't see anything need to improve right now. Anyhow, I think it look good on the center placement on chest.

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 11:33am

Thanks Flying Mouse! =)

Lily-n-Parker on Apr 14 '07 at 11:34am

this is extremely well done. i love all the details

Flying Mouse on Apr 14 '07 at 11:36am

No problem, Jemae. This design will get a high score, don't worry ;)

Edword on Apr 14 '07 at 11:37am

that's some awesome detail! I can't think of much to change this one.

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 11:37am

Thanks guys!!! =)

canadianbeaver on Apr 14 '07 at 11:40am

Holy crap that is incredible

adam antium on Apr 14 '07 at 11:41am

looks very good!

only thing i can be picky about is that some cars look a little like dingbats or clipart, but anyway the design overall is great

this will score good i think.

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 11:54am

Thanks!

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 11:59am

Suggested placement:

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Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 12:27pm

Any suggestions / comments? please..... =)

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 12:53pm

Anymore suggestions / comments? please..... =)

Kojima on Apr 14 '07 at 12:56pm

The ship is so awesome. The plane is too blobby and needs much more detail. The plane needs to have the same amount of detail as the ship. You could also remove the plane altogether because it is a little distracting.

Kojima on Apr 14 '07 at 12:58pm

It looks like the white car was copied and pasted 2 times... Someone is going to comment about that when the design is up for running and make a big fuss over it.

Kojima on Apr 14 '07 at 12:59pm

Right now you have realistic colors, but it might be better to use some more pleasing artistic colors. You should look at the top pallets at www.colourlovers.com.

speedyjvw on Apr 14 '07 at 1:11pm

i agree with koji

id like to see a monocrome blueish

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 6:40pm

Thanks Kojima & speedvjvw! I'll try my best to improve that! =)

Edword on Apr 14 '07 at 7:23pm

kojima - cool website!

yeohgh on Apr 14 '07 at 7:45pm

WOWOWOW..that cool jemae, it must take u long time to get this done, welldone! love the detail!!! F1 race!!!!

how thing in KL? :D

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 8:05pm

thanks yeoh! KL is good, only a bit hot.. What about you?

Jemae on Apr 14 '07 at 8:11pm

Yap .... Kojima, thanks for the cool "colourlover" website! very helpful. =)

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 4:31am

Guys? =)

Alexandra Marie on Apr 15 '07 at 9:05am

It must be done on that color shirt. It looks awesome.

MrDomino on Apr 15 '07 at 9:20am

I'm obsessed with details and the lazy perspective on the cars really irritates me. But, it's not likely that a large portion of the voters will notice that.

hxcassandra on Apr 15 '07 at 9:42am

detail, detail, detail!!

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 11:15am

THANKS Mr Domino & Hxcassandra....

Don't worry too much, will try my best to improve the details on the design include the cars with more perspective look. Just give me time.

THANKS for your concern & support! =)

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 11:27am

Other then this?

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 6:38pm

Hai!

Stevethegreat on Apr 15 '07 at 6:49pm

oooooOOOoooooh

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 7:03pm

koolest_chicken_91 on Apr 15 '07 at 7:17pm

i like it!!!!!

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 7:23pm

Thanks!...still alot of work to do on this! =)

yoshi andrian on Apr 15 '07 at 7:42pm

wow! nice design Jemae! great detail!

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 7:44pm

Hai, yoshi! lama gak dengar berita? apakhabar kamu?

yoshi andrian on Apr 15 '07 at 7:53pm

kabar baik, Jemae. hey, tunggu submission saya kobalorasi dengan kooky ya.. work in progress

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 8:07pm

Udah pasti dong! saya pasti tunngu! "BERDUA denganmu pasti lebih BAIK!" bukan begitu dong? Hahaha =)

herky on Apr 15 '07 at 8:21pm

Cool illustration and idea. Love all the details and how you rendered the water/waves. I think it's good to go.

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 8:27pm

THANKS Herky! =)

xiv on Apr 15 '07 at 8:31pm

add some text to the helicopter.

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 8:32pm

So Herky when they will print your "Tribeca Film...design contest!" ? I love that one, pretty cute design! If printed.....sure will buy that for my little princes! =)

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 8:33pm

GREAT xiv! thanks for the brilliant idea! Sure, I'll look on it=)

jimmytan on Apr 15 '07 at 9:33pm

woh man its too awesome crazy work!! u improve alot man.. i think this is Sepang golden beach F1 huh.. wil vote 5 for this 1 ^^,

Jemae on Apr 15 '07 at 9:53pm

Hahaha, Thanks Jimmy! =)

kooky love on Apr 16 '07 at 1:42am

GREAT $5

kooky love on Apr 16 '07 at 1:48am

Is it too late to add suggestion?

make the ship longer.

Jemae on Apr 16 '07 at 2:27am

Nop! still alots of work need to do here! THANKS! =)

peater on Apr 16 '07 at 2:29am

nicely done.

although i think it's funny that we could get more input here than in the critiques section.

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