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Montro
Montro aka Tomas De Santis is a 34.42 year old boy, has been a member since June 1, 2006, has scored 3,064 submissions, giving an average score of 2.64, helping 105 designs get printed.
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Any thoughts on how I can improve this? Thank you!

Resistance
   Resistance on Feb 17 '11 at 8:29am
You might actually have to put a small "Opacity" below each one. I mean, even if people don't get the opacity reference, they will think it is something about living or dead. The opacity joke is funnier tho, and you wanna make sure it is clear without the title.
Resistance
   Resistance on Feb 17 '11 at 8:30am
Or maybe just have one of them being adjusted by a mouse and have it say opacity on just that one?
trindli
trindli on Feb 17 '11 at 8:36am
why is the 0% one a girl and later it's a boy?
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 17 '11 at 8:38am
I like it a lot, I would change the start one to a boy and make the ghost hand on the left side the same as the right
Montro
   Montro on Feb 17 '11 at 8:48am
Great suggestions guys.

@resistance, you are right, it does read life/death. hmmmm

@Aaron, I'm going to do that, thanks!

@Trindli, it's a girl because it is an imaginary friend, i guess it reads as the same character though. I will change that. thank you!
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davidfromdallas
   davidfromdallas on Feb 21 '11 at 11:42pm
Conceptually, you never cease to amaze me.

Executionally, this works very well.

I was going to make a few suggestions, but Aaron made them for me. Can't wait to $5 it, man!
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