huh?

Oh ok. I get it.



It's kind of funny.

you're gonna have to add way more than that to make it interesting or printable.



you should consider:



-adding some detail to the moon (craters, hatching, something)

-adding some detail to the background (stars, clouds?)

-changing the color of the outline to something interesting (orange, for example)

-put the design on an interesting color

-use another color to suggest the unlit portion of the moon

-generally spend a lot more time.



Some other things you should consider as a beginner:



- presentation is important. most beginners just slap their design on the center of the standard template, and have the whole thing floating in empty space. If you do that, no one will be able to see your design because it is too small, and it will look boring because most of the preview will be empty space. You only need to have a small drawing (or photo) in the corner to indicate where your design will be placed. Use the rest of the space to present your design. Some examples of good presentation:

I hope they print Summer's Passing...

Too simple for my taste. It definitely needs more detail because without your description, I wouldn't have a clue what this meant. I think this could possibly be something really good, but it just needs a lot of work.



Placement will be important too.

Thank you for your comments! I will definitely put more work into it!

~Sara

any more suggestions, threadless-ers?