spires
spires aka James is a 27.83 year old boy, has been a member since May 13, 2006, has scored 5143 submissions, giving an average score of 2.58.
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  Sep 14 '06 by spires        43 Comments        Watch this
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Starry Slumberland






PREVIEW VOTE: 1, 2 or neither

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El_Dictador_Cubano
El_Dictador_Cubano on Sep 14 '06 at 11:17pm
how could I possibly critique that? You mock me with your brilliant artistry.

Nice sub.
spires
   spires on Sep 14 '06 at 11:38pm
Wow, that's one of the nicest compliments I've ever received and I am thoroughly blushing.

:-)
tintin220
tintin220 on Sep 14 '06 at 11:40pm
I must agree with the great Dictador here.

I suppose all I can sugest is add some sort of similar effect to the carts? Perhaps to the wings.

They remind of the Flying toasters... lol, excellent job.
slaterock
   slaterock on Sep 14 '06 at 11:41pm
oh wow. wow. oh wow. Beautiful.
spires
   spires on Sep 14 '06 at 11:56pm
Thanks tintin220 and Slaterock!

I'm debating putting some human riders in a flying cart, to signify the two main characters from the movie. Too literal a concept?

I'm also wondering if I need anything else to fill this out. Is this enough?
Stevethegreat
Stevethegreat on Sep 14 '06 at 11:58pm
Fidel said it nicely


I'm sure if I was smart I could find ways to make it much better but sadly I'm an idiot
shirtflirt
shirtflirt on Sep 15 '06 at 11:05am
sould you please make sure this gets printed
i want it

sweetness yet again mi amigo.
chelly
chelly on Sep 15 '06 at 11:06am
in the swirly center thing, i think instead of going to a couple solid circles, you should make it look like a black (navy) hole. it would make the image play with the eyes because it could either be a cone or a pyramid. hope that makes sense.

not a fan of the solid flower.

should the other carts have faces?

great sub by the way. i say don't even worry about putting people in there. but if you do, it'll still be wonderful.
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Sep 15 '06 at 11:56am
I really liek this it doenst need any characters IMO as for tintins sugg. maybe add a dotted border to teh wings just to tie the two styles together? just a suggestion
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Sep 15 '06 at 11:56am
I really liek this it doenst need any characters IMO as for tintins sugg. maybe add a dotted border to teh wings just to tie the two styles together? just a suggestion
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Sep 15 '06 at 11:56am
damn you double posts
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Sep 15 '06 at 12:11pm
I really liek this it doenst need any characters IMO as for tintins sugg. maybe add a dotted border to teh wings just to tie the two styles together? just a suggestion
squintygirl
squintygirl on Sep 15 '06 at 12:11pm
This is really quite lovely, especially the colours.
amy122166
amy122166 on Sep 15 '06 at 12:20pm
love the technique...makes me want to go back to bed and dream :)
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 12:25pm
hey guys, thanks for all the input! Makes me feel like this one has some potential :)

Thanks all for the suggestions. I think that I'll add some outlines to the wings to bring that style into the carts.

Does anyone else have an issue with the solid flower towards the top?
amy122166
amy122166 on Sep 15 '06 at 12:26pm
i like the flower!
iotadial
iotadial on Sep 15 '06 at 12:27pm
are you going to submit this today?
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 12:30pm
I'll submit it as soon as I figure out how to present it the best possible way.

I'm thinking flash, but I'm not sure how the strokes will fare during the conversion.
shirtflirt
shirtflirt on Sep 15 '06 at 12:41pm
you know, upon second investigation, i don't like the flower on top.
too solid
too white.

all else rocks.
Ste7en
   Ste7en on Sep 15 '06 at 12:43pm
I agree about the flower
Stubby42
Stubby42 on Sep 15 '06 at 12:44pm
Its good but I'm not sure what it would look like on a tee, could you do one of those images?
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 12:50pm
sure stubby

I'm going to upload an update soon with flower and wings changes
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 1:00pm
updated
chelly
chelly on Sep 15 '06 at 1:13pm
the blog died on me earlier so i didn't get to say...

make it BIG
'cuz it is purdy

like the updates
shirtflirt
shirtflirt on Sep 15 '06 at 1:23pm
try the new flower behind the orbit?
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Sep 15 '06 at 1:26pm
spires this is fantastic ... Im hoping for good things from this one cause I wanna wear it
littlem
littlem on Sep 15 '06 at 1:26pm
pretttyyyy...*becomes catatonic
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Sep 15 '06 at 1:28pm
by the way how does one get th dotted lines and such as I really like that effect
Joe Harding
Joe Harding on Sep 15 '06 at 1:30pm
love it.
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 1:37pm
wulla: it's all illustrator lines, made dotted

shirt: I'm going to post a preview, I need help on presentation. Long designs are hard to present. The preview will have that flower behind the orbit.
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Sep 15 '06 at 1:46pm
thanks spires sometimes I forget the things Ive learned and need to be reminded
ShortyGotGaaame
ShortyGotGaaame on Sep 15 '06 at 2:24pm
That's pretty
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 2:24pm
I need help with previews! PLLLEEEEEASE
the czar
the czar on Sep 15 '06 at 2:27pm
I like number 2. The changes you made make it even better.
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 2:34pm
bump
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 2:43pm
I also think that number two is the one I should use.
yeohgh
   yeohgh on Sep 15 '06 at 2:49pm
hi spires, just too good and very hard to choose,but two i guess is the best to go, and this is wonderful work u created!!!
spires
   spires on Sep 15 '06 at 4:04pm
subbed #2
phlegm.atic
phlegm.atic on Sep 15 '06 at 4:07pm
phlegm.atic
phlegm.atic on Sep 15 '06 at 4:08pm
^ huh, how did that happen?
i meant to write:
jackanapes
jackanapes on Sep 15 '06 at 4:09pm
magnifico
Skipper6745
   Skipper6745 on Sep 15 '06 at 4:10pm
OMG
phlegm.atic
phlegm.atic on Sep 15 '06 at 4:10pm
now i'm really confused...ok, guess i'll write it like this, then:

i really love it!

(hope it functions this time o_O)
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