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TimScribble
TimScribble aka Timothy J Scribbleton the IV is a 31.14 year old boy, has been a member since March 7, 2006, has scored 7,474 submissions, giving an average score of 1.69, helping 91 designs get printed.
URL: http://thealcave.blogspot.com/
AIM: timscribble
Slogan Help Part Deux. One character too long
My current slogan idea is: Video games taught me that when life gives you lemons jump on them

That is one character too long.

I thought about taking out the that and going with: Video games taught me when life gives you lemons, jump on them.

But it doesnt feel like it flows right. Any thoughts on how to lose a character in the first one?

psykomakia
psykomakia on Jul 30 '10 at 3:09pm
Video games taught me: when life gives you lemons, jump on them.
rhythmdev9
rhythmdev9 on Jul 30 '10 at 3:12pm
Video Game Lesson #49: When life gives you lemons, jump on them
TimScribble
TimScribble on Jul 30 '10 at 3:23pm
Those are some good ideas. Thanks.
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