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Chaymation
Chaymation aka Chay Hawes is a 29.82 year old boy, has been a member since February 9, 2006, has scored 3,000 submissions, giving an average score of 1.94, helping 22 designs get printed.
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WIP - Mr. Meds - Reservoir Drugs
This is my latest design that I am posting for feedback.
Someone said it is more likely to get seen in this section than in the Critique pages, not sure how true that is.

My design is based on a famous kids book series, an iconic movie and prescription medication!

Anyway here it is, advice most welcome!


toopersent
toopersent on Feb 15 '12 at 4:46pm
Why is it Ms. Pink? I like the concept. But I'm not sure how I like it with the squares on the shirt. If you go with squares, I would make them without any fill (transparent) so the color of the shirt shows through.
Chaymation
Chaymation on Feb 15 '12 at 4:53pm
Ms Pink is the contraceptive pill :)

I sort of went with the squares so that it is a bit more like the "Mr Men books" that I was referencing, but perhaps it would look better without them.
Chaymation
Chaymation on Feb 15 '12 at 4:53pm
thanks for the feedback btw
toopersent
toopersent on Feb 15 '12 at 7:56pm
Maybe just the outline of the squares? They look much better on heather grey because the square background closely matches the shirt color. SeewhatI'msayinthere?
Chaymation
Chaymation on Feb 16 '12 at 4:08am
yeah i agree with you, they look better on the grey, which means I'll have to go with a grey, cream, white or light blue shirt i think.

Cheers for the feedback.
2 days later
Chaymation
Chaymation on Feb 18 '12 at 9:07am
Hi, I took your comments into consideration and this design is up for voting now. Please vote if you have a minute. Thanks :)

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