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• haha well cheers to those that have given constructive criticism, without just calling the design shit :P

  And thanks for the honesty in whether you think it will be printed. There's no point in me working on a design that has no chance of being printed!

  I think I will move on to something else. After all, this was only a random first idea that I threw up for the sake of getting a clue as to how things work around here!

  posted 4 months, 1 week ago in Is my design ready? HELP!

• taz-pie said:

  seriously. just stop.

  Play nice sweetheart :)

  posted 4 months, 1 week ago in Is my design ready? HELP!

• Akaka said:

  Illustration skills aside I feel like the concept is borderline offensive... I mean, if you really break it down and think about it it's promoting the idea that lesbians are around to entertain male fantasies. That was probably not your intention but I want to give you a heads up that it can be interpreted like that.

  Fair enough! I also had two other ideas using the same basic concept, which I have linked below. Do you think It would be worthwhile for me to pursue any of these other ideas? I mean, I understand that two of my ideas could perhaps be perceived as misogynistic...

  Do you think I'm just flogging a dead horse here and I should move on to other ideas?

  

  

  posted 4 months, 1 week ago in Is my design ready? HELP!

• veciocoldobro said:

  I would try to add some shadowing on the rest of the shapes too, to give some body to it. Not the gradient shadowing you had before, just like you made on the faces.

  How's this?

  posted 4 months, 1 week ago in Is my design ready? HELP!

• Haha great call on the tongue idea X-Sight!

  I also now actually like it better without shadows, though I added some darkened edges around the faces to give them more depth.

  anybody else have some more ideas as to how this design could be improved?

  posted 4 months, 1 week ago in Is my design ready? HELP!