The graphic is sparkly. Once it is on the shirt, it seems dark. Maybe the gems could be bigger and further apart? Also, my statement earlier was a suggestion for a slogan for the shirt.
I don't want to tell you my vision -- this is your vision. But I would put the heads closer together, extend the snake's body towards the lizard. This is your image. It has to tell your story.
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